作者yenchenchen (不就是重头开始)
看板learnyf
标题Re: [文法] 句子分析
时间Mon Aug 20 16:21:52 2007
※ 引述《slind (你别对着萤幕傻笑,很蠢耶)》之铭言:
: ※ [本文转录自 Eng-Class 看板]
: 作者: slind (你别对着萤幕傻笑,很蠢耶) 看板: Eng-Class
: 标题: [文法] 句子分析
: 时间: Sat Aug 18 15:45:11 2007
: Students from local high schools, many of them accompanied by their families,
: received a variety of information about careers.
上面这句话的的Students from local high schools 为本句话的主词,主要动词为received
,那中间那句其实是独立分词构句的用法,句子还原为:
Many students from local high schools , and many of them are accompanied by
their families , received a variety of information about careers.
当由and 连接两个句子时,若两句子的主词不同,把and 连接词省略,主词不省,後方动词
部份,主动改Ving,被动的则去be动词保留p.p.
此为独立分词构句的用法,另外,and many of.....这句也可以用关代去连接句子,
可以用many of whom are accompanied .....
不知这样分析有没有帮到你?
: 请问上句倒装还原後是下面这句吗? 感觉怪怪的...
: Many of them who from local high schools received a variety of
: information about careers accompanied by their families
这句话文法完全错误吧!关代代替主格引导形容词子句的话,who後方会紧接动词,这个部份
就已经错了,另外,这句话有两个动词received和accompanied却没有连接词,这样也有问题
我认为可以这样写
Many of students from local high schools who are accompanied by their families
received a variety of information about careers.
这样文法才通,不过要是我来表达,我应该会用第一种表达方式吧
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※ 编辑: yenchenchen 来自: 122.126.73.172 (08/20 16:36)
1F:推 slind:原来对等连接词也能减化阿,谢谢你的详解唷! 08/21 01:13
2F:推 yenchenchen:不客气~ 08/21 01:25