作者kles91350711 (arthur3507)
看板Translation
标题Re: [英中] 能帮我检查我的自我介绍吗？
时间Fri Sep 22 15:20:12 2017
闲闲没事，来练习一下优化。
如有错误，还请各位指正~
Hi Guys , My name is Shei .
You may ask me thay Why don't I just name myself "Jason Rob" ?
Well , I'll say that's because "Jason Rob" is too common .
So I decided to call myself "Shie"
I am good at dancing and painting , and these are my works.
Oh , please don't forget to pass the album to the person behind you right afte
r you watch my album , thanks.
My dream is to become a model.
Althought my family members and my friends said that's imposdible because of m
y appearance , but I still believe I can made it.
I'm quite sensitive, so try not to hurt me. :P
Back to junior high school , I was hated by some of my classmates.
They even called me......bitch.
Well , I don't care.
Cause they are childish , and I'm already an adult.
I'll get much more stronger.
Thanks for listening .
Love you guys.
以上，如有错误，还请多多指教~
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1F：嘘 tigerbruce: 时态多注意 09/22 23:06
2F：推 spacedunce5: 补血 09/23 11:09
3F：推 argelfrast: "after you watch my album"改成"after you've gone t 10/03 08:25
4F：→ argelfrast: hrough my album "？ 10/03 08:25
5F：→ gentianpan: although~/but~皆非主要子句，须选择去其中一个. 10/07 15:48