我觉得没问题的段落就不引用了 一点想法 你参考看看　也欢迎其它意见 : : 原文连结：http://nyti.ms/1rHWtlq : : HONG KONG — A doctor running as an independent won the mayor’s race : in Taipei, the capital, on Saturday, as Taiwan’s governing party suffered : heavy losses in local elections. In response to the defeats dealt to : the party, which favors closer ties with China, the prime minister resigned. : 香港讯 — 一位独立参选的医生在星期六赢得了首都台北的市长选举，而台湾的执政党 : 在地方选举受到了重挫。倾中的执政党籍行政院长以辞职回应了败选。 "在台湾，一位独立参选的医生於...市长选举，亲中的执政党则在地方选举受到 了重挫。对於败选，行政院长以辞职作为回应。" 句法结构上做了更大的调动...不知道为什麽 觉得把"台湾"放在句中跟"首都"後才讲很怪 "亲(倾)中"是修饰政党的 你的写法像是在讲院长本人而已 应该可以更明确一点 : The election results, including a victory by the opposition Democratic : Progressive Party in the central city of Taichung, signal that Taiwan's : governing Chinese Nationalist Party, known as the Kuomintang or K.M.T., : will be hard-pressed to retain the presidency in the 2016 election. : 这次的选举结果，包括反对党 DPP 在台中取得的胜利，显示了台湾的执政党—中国国民党 : 在 2016 总统大选将面临苦战。 1. 我觉得"台"或"台"都能用啦 但要在文章内统一用法才行 2. "这次选举结果－－包括反对党...－－显示了台湾执政的中国国民党将在 2016争取保有总统一位时面临苦战" 有些英文习惯 中文人士可能还不是那麽熟悉(补述内容直接插入句中以逗号隔开) retain的意思你没翻到 : The Kuomintang’s losses also suggest that Taiwan voters may be turning : against party efforts to forge closer ties with China. : 国民党的惨败也间接证明了，台湾的投票者反对该党希望跟中国建立更密切关系的企图。 "投票者"=>"选民" : As Beijing has moved to enforce strict control over voting reforms in Hong : Kong, a policy that has set off protests known as the Occupy Central movement, : voters in Taiwan have said their sense of unease toward China has heightened. : 北京当局正对香港的投票改革采取更加严格的控管，这个措施引发了被称为“占中”的 : 抗议行动，而台湾的投票者认为这使他们对中国感到更加不安。 "由於北京推行严格控管香港选举改革的政策，加上後续引发的“占中＂抗议行动， 台湾的选民认为他们对中国感到更加不安。" : “I think the result is a very strong signal not only to the K.M.T., but a : signal to Beijing, too,”said Hsu Szu-chien, a scholar of Chinese politics : at Academia Sinica, a state-financed research institution in Taipei. : “Particularly after the Occupy Central movement, I think the Taiwanese voters : are alarmed by the relationship between Beijing and Hong Kong.” : “我认为选举的结果是个很强烈的讯息，不只是对国民党，也是对北京当局。” : Hsu Szu-chien 说，他是中研院（位於台北的国家级研究单位）的一位中国政治学者。 : 特别是在占中运动之後，我想台湾的投票者受到北京和香港之间关系的警告。” 1. 第一句读得懂 但好像不太通顺 总感觉"对XXX"後面还要接几个字: 1.a "对北京当局也是如此" 1.b "我认为这结果不只是对国民党，对北京当局来说也是个..." 2. "中研院(...)的中国政治学者徐斯俭，如此表示。" 3. "我想台湾的选民开始警觉起北京和香港之间的关系" : Mr. Ko, 55, was supported by the Democratic Progressive Party but ran as an : independent on a platform advocating transparency and a bridging of the : partisan divide. The party, which favors independence for Taiwan, is known : as the green camp, and the Kuomintang and other parties that favor closer : relations with China and eventual unification are known as the blue camp. : 五十五岁的柯文哲先生虽得到民进党的支持，是在一个透明公开，以及跨越党派 : 隔阂的基础上独立参选。带有台独倾向的民进党被称作绿营，而国民党以及其他 : 倾中及统派的政党被称为蓝营。 1. "是在一个"=>"却选择在" 2. "倾中及统派"=>"倾向中国与终极统一" 你的写法好像暗示两种政党: 一种只是倾中 另一种还偏好统一 但原文意思应该是指到两者特性兼备的 : Mr. Lien is the son of Lien Chan, a Kuomintang elder who has served as : Taiwan’s prime minister and vice president. But such a legacy, along with : Mr. Lien’s personal wealth, was more of a burden than an advantage at a : time when the average Taipei resident is worried about housing prices and : the gap between the rich and the poor. : 连胜文先生是国民党大老、前行政院长、暨前副总统连战的儿子。然而家族光环 : 和连先生的富有，在一般台北居民担心房价和贫富差距时，却成为重担而非优势。 1. "富有"=>"财富" 2. "然而当一般...差距时，连先生的家族光环和个人财富，反倒是重担而非优势" : Voters across Taiwan chose from nearly 20,000 candidates for 11,130 local : seats, electing village chiefs and mayors in six municipalities, among other : posts. While the results hinged on local issues and the parties’ get-out-the- : vote efforts, the contests also offered an indication of public sentiment : ahead of the presidential election in 2016. Presidents in Taiwan are limited : to two four-year terms, and the current president, Ma Ying-jeou, is serving : his final term. : 全台的投票者从两万名候选人中，选出一万一千一百三十位地方代表，包括六个直辖市 : 的和市长和村里长，以及其他位置。虽说选举结果与地方议题和各政营的努力催票 : 息息相关，这次的竞选也提前为 2016 总统大选秀出了民意走向。台湾总统任期限制为 : 四年并可连任一次，而现任总统马英九正在他的最後任期中。 1. "地方代表"=>"地方席次" 代表好像常指民意代表 席次似乎更精准点 "位置"=>"职位" 公职人员的位置 2. "这次竞选却也预告了2016总统大选的民意走向" : Mr. Ma has been deeply unpopular over the past year. Food safety scandals : and tepid economic growth have stoked discontent. The president’s efforts : to forge closer trade ties with China have raised questions about whether : only the wealthy will benefit and whether Taiwan’s sovereignty will be put at : risk by increasing economic reliance on China. Student demonstrators occupied : Taiwan’s legislature for more than three weeks this spring to protest the : Kuomintang’s efforts to pass a trade bill with China. : 马英九先生在过去一年非常的不受欢迎。食安丑闻以及微弱的经济成长累积了民众的不满 : 总统对於与中国建立紧密贸易关系的努力，引发了是否只有富人受益，以及增加对中国 : 的经济依赖是否会危害台湾主权等疑问。一群学运示威者在今年春季时，占领了台湾 : 立法院超过三个星期，抗议国民党试图通过与中国的一个贸易条例。 1. "食安丑闻与贫弱的经济成长，助长民众的不满。" 2. "总统尝试与中国建立..." 3. "一群学运示威者在今年春天占领了台湾立法院超过三个星期，...与中国的贸易条例" "春季"好像在谈规律性事物才会用上；这里"一个"应该不必要 --

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