※ 引述《a8899276 (dennis)》之铭言： : I want to share some of my experience. I have known some foreigners from ^^^^^^^^^这边有点像中式英文 建议改成: I would like to share my experience with you. : different countries for almost 3 and half years. We hand out almost every week 这句也满中式的... 感觉像是你三年半来一直在对外国朋友重复"认识"这个动作 (包括认识&不认识的) 可以改成: I started to make friends with foreigners from different countries around 3 years ago. 不好意思眼花没看到...We "hang" out ... : and we have lots of activities, like seeing a movie or a party. It is true we Or "watching" movies "having" parties : can talk to each other very well, but I found myself still having lots of speak very well...很少会用talk very well.. you may say: We can talk to each other without information gap/language barrier. : same conversations after I had known them one year. The problems is you still : have to keep learning English related to lots of different issues including : cultures, politics and u know what I am saying now. The point is that SPEAKING : means u just open ur mouth and u think ur English is pretty good. NO!!! ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ The point is that..even though you dare to speak out confidently/without fear, it doesn't mean that your English ability is pretty well. (you can utilize English very well) ↑你的意思是这样吗? 原句不是很顺..念起来卡卡的 : Keeping reading and listening!! Try talking some topics like cyclone happened 祈使句:"Keep" (practicing) reading and listening Try "to" talk /discuss... : in Myanmar(Burma) or Earthquake in China with your friends. For me, I am : not good at marketing and therefore I have to keep improving this part. ^^^^^^ 对於专业知识领域来说 marketing 用 this "field"必较适合 : DONT JUST TALK!! 只是给点文法上的建议 没有要加入战局XD 说不定我也有错的地方 请大家指教噜! 仅修改如上 :) --

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