作者svng72 (论文大翻修起动!)
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标题[闲聊] 这个句子的文法结构
时间Fri Oct 30 01:12:22 2009
最近在写一篇关於简爱Jane Eyre的硕士论文...blah blah blah...
然後在进行相关的修改,结果把其中一个句子改成这样= =
这七行其实只是一句话喔 XD
In order to avoid the innate stereotyped woman image—passive, obedient, and
submissive—from obstructing her way to achieve self-development and to put
her constructive assertion—“It is in vain to say human beings ought to be
satisfied with tranquillity: they must have action” (JE 95)—into practice,
Jane's further rebellions different from other female figures bearing
traditional and obedient attitude in the novel, such as Helen Burns, Bessie,
Miss Temple, etc., are expectable.
感觉太长了,如果是大家会怎麽修改呢~
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1F:推 bbson:不要引用阿 10/31 03:31
2F:→ svng72:那如果把引用跟破折号拿掉,句子有其他错误吗0.0? 10/31 16:09