作者funkycat (阿茂)
站内ST-English
标题[问题]可以写得更精简吗?
时间Mon Feb 2 20:21:44 2009
抱歉请教各位
以下是我写的信件内容的其中一部分(包含三段)
但是想把内容改得更精简(把3段的内容浓缩成两段甚至一段)
请问可以怎麽修改呢?
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I know your contact info and company via the website. Curremtly, we are
seeking business partner in your country. I would like to take the chance
to establish relationship with you.
You will never regret to contact us, because we are one of the best RF
connector, Cable Assembly and Antenna manufactures in Taiwan with the cutting-
edge technology and superior R&D team.
It's with great pleasure we invite your interest toward our products.Our
customers are spreaded in Europe, Asia, South America and Middle East.We
would like to take this opportunity to introduce our company and products,
with the hope that we can cooperate with each other in the future.
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感谢^^"
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1F：推 khwang0:怪怪的.. 不如先介绍自己公司，再赞美对方是理想的合作对 02/03 03:46
2F：→ khwang0:像。再陈述合作的好处...我可能会这样写吧 02/03 03:47
3F：→ funkycat:了解 感谢 khwang0大大 02/03 08:02