※ 引述《nozomii (nozomi)》之铭言： : In my opinion, I think the foreign visitor should go to Mountain A-Li. : Since this visitor can only stay in Taiwan for one day, he or she has to go : to a place that can represent the image of Taiwan most clearly and show the : most beautiful part of Taiwan. There is the schedule I made to represent the ^^^^^ ("Here" in this context connects better.) : best parts of Mountain A-Li to support my recommendation. : First, starting from morning, you can take the special train which was once ^the ^^^* *Since the topic concerns a foreign visitor, your recommendation is made to that person, instead of the reader of this essay. You can refer to that person as "he or she", or you can assign a gender and use "he" or "she" consistently throughout the essay, instead of "you". : built for transporting timber to see the most spectacular sun-rising and have sunrise : a good starting of this trip. Then, you can walk on the path in the forest ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^(rephrasing recommended) trail(s) 步道 : which is famous of divine trees to recover the stressful nerves and relax for ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ to relieve stress to alleviate stress : your whole body. After the long walking, you can choose to find a restaurant : to have an aboriginal meal for lunch and watch the exotic shows which are : performed by the aborigine of Taiwan. aborigines (An aborigine is a (one) aboriginal person.) : In the afternoon, you can watch the flowers. No matter : which season you come, there are always different kinds of flower blossom : waiting for you. On the other hand, you can also enjoy the : Taiwanese tea here and take some rest on the green. : During the night, you can watch the twinkle stars and feel the comfortable At night : wind blows on your face, take you to dream to end the day. blowing taking : On the whole, Mountain A-Li is a place that you can spend one day from where : morning to night to feel the different type of beauty at one time in Taiwan. to experience all the beauties of Taiwan in one trip. : Since Taiwan is famous of its breathtaking views of the mountains, Mountain for : A-Li is the must visit spot to see the gorgeous views. Someone may suggest must-visit xxx : that there are more mountains which are worth to see. But in my opinion, since : the visitor has only one day in Taiwan, it is important to use the time : efficiently and see the most aspects of Taiwan as possible. Therefore, as many aspects : Mountain A-Li is the only spot that you can do the most different kinds of where : activities in the same place without wasting the time on transportation, xxx : and enjoy the every time period of one day in Taiwan. -- 一个 学术英文写作 领域的讨论板 在 PTT （telnet:ptt.cc〉 【 分组讨论区 】 --> 11 国家研究院 政治, 文学, 学术 --> 科学学术研究院 --> 学术总合研究中心 --> ★ST-English PTT 学术英文/论文写作班 --

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