作者philJamy (Jamy)
看板ST-English
标题Re: [写作班] 托福第16周
时间Wed Jul 9 00:03:28 2008
: 3. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Boys and girls
: should attend separate schools. Use specific reasons and examples to
: support your answer.
I disagree that boys and girls should attend separate schools. School is
not only a place to attain knowledge, but to learn to socialize, including
dealing with others, male or female. Though adults may think a school with only
boys or girls is beneficial for studying, As a teenager,(>///<) I don't think
that could prevent us from curiosity.
Socialization is one of the essential elements of education. Knowledge is
important, of course, but social relationship could be equally valuable. One
can never learn about the complete concept of relationship without interaction
with the people of the other sexualality. School has always been seen as a
small module of the society. Can you imagine a society composed of merely men
or women? If not, how can one learn to socialize in such an unreal situation?
Some of my friends study in a school without females, which we call 'monk
school.' After entering the college, they don't even know how to talk to girls,
even though they really like some beautiful ladies! Whenever a girl talks to
one of them, he will be so shy that he can't speak a word. As his friend, I
feel it a pity that they never had the chance to learn to be with females,
which lead to the embarassing events like that.
In addition, students will do whatever they are curious about, no matter
how others stop them. Teenagers are especially interested in the relationship
with the one they love. Do boys in a school without girls think they should
pay all his attention to the studies? No! Things interesting to them are never
the tests and books, but the girls in other schools. To know how it feels to
be with a girl, these boys will try all they can to be in touch with girls.
They can always find a way to go out with the one he likes, regardless of
whether parents or teachers permit or not, or if it's a long distance form the
girl. Not even to mention that adults separate boys and girls in different
schools, which can't really stop them from interacting.
Since it's of no use to separate boys and girls by putting them in
different schools, adults should be more open-minded to let their children
learn about social relationships in a normal circumstance in a right way.
※ 编辑: philJamy 来自: 59.121.115.231 (07/09 00:07)
1F:推 outofdejavu:School is a place not only to attain knowledge... 07/09 00:45
2F:→ outofdejavu:这样写才有对称 :) 07/09 00:45
3F:推 outofdejavu:正式文章勿缩写 07/09 00:51
4F:推 outofdejavu:异性the other/opposite sex。sexuality是性向。 07/09 00:53
5F:推 outofdejavu:a small module => model? 07/09 00:57
6F:→ outofdejavu:我是建议改成a minature of the society 07/09 00:58
7F:→ outofdejavu: miniature 07/09 00:58
8F:推 outofdejavu:", which lead to...that" => 07/09 01:02
9F:→ outofdejavu:". That leads to ...this." 07/09 01:02
10F:推 outofdejavu:我觉得whatever不是正式用字 07/09 01:05
11F:→ outofdejavu:are "never" the tests => not 07/09 01:06
12F:→ outofdejavu:"To know how..." => In order to know... 07/09 01:08
13F:推 outofdejavu:regardless of "whether...its" => 07/09 01:14
14F:→ outofdejavu:the parents' or teachers' objections or the long 07/09 01:14
15F:→ outofdejavu:distance from the girl 07/09 01:14
16F:推 outofdejavu:circumstance => surroundings 07/09 01:17
17F:→ outofdejavu:circumstance通常是plural form(查一下字典比较好); 07/09 01:19
18F:→ outofdejavu:我觉得circumstance不适用这句 07/09 01:20
19F:推 outofdejavu:个人浅见 =___= 07/09 01:29
20F:推 outofdejavu:还有一个...应该是acquire knowledge 07/09 01:35
21F:→ philJamy:谢谢o大! 请问:若不写whatever,就换成no matter what 07/09 17:26
22F:→ philJamy:是吗? 此外,To know 不就是in order to know吗? 07/09 17:27
23F:→ philJamy:差异在於? 07/09 17:28
24F:推 outofdejavu:To know=in order to know,不过系上的外籍教授是建议 07/09 17:48
25F:→ outofdejavu:把in order写出来。 07/09 17:49
26F:→ outofdejavu:如果你是要表达"为了"的话 07/09 17:49
27F:推 outofdejavu:那个whatever在这里可以改成things就好了 07/09 17:52
29F:→ outofdejavu:该网页为BBC的网页,有关in order to的用法 07/09 18:00
30F:→ outofdejavu:里头有写到"If we use in order to it sounds a bit 07/09 18:00
31F:→ outofdejavu:more formal and..." 07/09 18:00
32F:→ outofdejavu:"Before stative verbs like know, seem, appear, 07/09 18:01
33F:→ outofdejavu:understand, have, etc, it is more usual to use in 07/09 18:01
34F:→ outofdejavu: order to or so as to" 07/09 18:02
35F:→ philJamy:Got it! Thanks a lot! 07/09 23:39