作者corson (浪人剑客)
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标题[写作班]corson 托福第一周-3
时间Fri Feb 8 11:40:59 2008
I do not have any strong, positive or negative answer
for this actually. However, my first impression was
the disappearance of expectation to Chinese New Year
when I saw the question. I heard that people were very
expected the coming of Chinese New Year. Many good foods
cannot be supplied in usual days due to the poverty of
farm. Everyone will expect the New Year because they can
eat delicious foods like chicken or pork. Nowadays, I
feel that the Chinese New Year atmosphere gradually
decayed with the convenience getting of foods.
Our life has become very different than before.
The world mainly became an industrial and commercial
community, so the food also became easier to prepare
for convenience. Microwave oven can help us to eat
the hot and delicious foods even in midnight.
Instant noodles can be a best solution when you
had no time to get a meal outside the room. However,
I have to ask: do we need the kind of life? Although
I do not have the standpoint to opposite getting the
food easily because I still loved the McDonald’s
or walked to 7-11 to buy a battle of red tea, I want
to ask: who give us this desire? It is like a globalized
conspiracy.
I was looked like a double-faced person.
I criticized the fast foods but got their advantages
at same time. When we eliminated the poverty,
we also eliminated some tradition unknowingly.
I do not know whether it is good, and I think
that is the problem.
又要有劳大家了 我知道还是写的很烂 但自己又很难知道怎麽改
只觉得有些地方就是怪怪的 希望这样写方向没有错才好
谢谢各位罗
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