作者dvlin (Dee)
看板ST-English
标题Re: [写作班] HIbaby, Liver
时间Wed Dec 12 03:26:33 2007
※ 引述《HIbaby (燃烧吧! 嗨~北鼻!)》之铭言：
: The liver consists several types cells that including hepatocytes,
: Kupffer cells, hepatic stellate cells, sinusoidal endothelial cells,
: and blood cells.
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1F：推 HIbaby:Dee, 不知道这样写有何缺点? 12/11 17:52
这篇文章里用的字汇还挺专业的，是不是稍加解说会比较好?
例如描述adult liver的组成，可以用这样的句型:
The adult liver consists of several types of cells, including hepatocytes,
which are involved in the synthesis of protein, cholesterol, and bile
;
Kupffer cells, which recycle old red blood cells
; and liver sinusoids,
small blood vessels where the oxygen-rich blood from the hepatic artery
meets the nutrient-rich blood from the portal vein.
分号的功用相当於逗号，但是只在中间有其他逗号，或是句子过长的时候使用:
... A, B, and C.
... A, [descrption of A]
; B, [description of B]
; C, [description of C].
或者有第二层清单:
... A, including A1, A2, and A3
; B, including B1, B2, and B3
; and C,
including C1, C2, and C3.
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2F：推 HIbaby:举例说明的确很难写..感谢, 继续学习.. 12/12 09:41