在翻之前拜了一下辜狗大神，发现对岸也有翻译这首歌 不过内容为了整首歌的叙事性做了不小的更动 可以参考一下 http://zhidao.baidu.com/question/81611873.html 下面是我自己翻的，学艺不精请多见谅，有错处也望请指正。 A Little Piece Of Heaven 天堂的一角 Avenged Sevenfold 七级炼狱 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cXMobqWhpsk　 MV板 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=df0uDRQhL0o Live in LBC板 Before the story begins, is it such a sin For me to take what's mine, until the end of time? We were more than friends, before the story ends And I will take what's mine, create what God would never design 在这个故事开始之前 这让我有些罪恶感 那些我该得到的 到一切结束前我为何都没得到? 我们终於超越了朋友的界限 在这故事结束之前 而我将拿回我应得的 就连上帝都料想不到 Our love had been so strong for far too long I was weak with fear that something would go wrong Before the possibilities came true, I took all possibility from you Almost laughed myself to tears, conjuring her deepest fears (Come here you fxxking bitch) 我们的爱情是如此的坚固而长久 我是如此的害怕有什麽会出了差错 而在这点可能性成真之前 我将夺走你所有的可能性 我的笑声疯狂到接近撕裂 召唤出他最深沉的恐惧 (给我过来 你这他妈的婊子!) Must have stabbed her fifty fxxking times, I can't believe it Ripped her heart out right before her eyes, eyes over easy Eat it,eat it, eat it 必须要结束这婊子杀千刀的贱命 我无法置信 就在她的眼前 撕出她的心脏 然後吃了它 吃了它 吃了它 She was never this good in bed, even when she was sleeping Now she's just so perfect, I've never been quite so fxxking deep in It goes on and on and on I can keep you looking young and preserved forever With a fountain to spray on your youth whenever 她在床上从来没有让我这麽爽过 就算是她已经睡着的时候 而现在她是这麽样的完美 我从来没这麽她妈的深入 不停向下插的更深更深更深 我会让你永远看起来这麽年轻而且永远保持美丽 伴随着注入我的泉水让你无论何时都这麽青春 Cause I really always knew that my little crime Would be cold that's why I got a heater for your thighs And I know, I know it's not your time but bye bye And a word to the wise when the fire dies You think it's over but it's just begun But baby don't cry 因为我真的随时记得我这小小的罪恶 就让我来为你变冷的双腿加热 而我知道 我知道对你来说这实在不幸 但我仍要向你道别 在激情退却之後才是真正的高潮 你觉得这已经结束但这只是个开始 但我的宝贝别哭 You had my heart, at least for the most part Cause everybody's gotta die sometime, we fell apart Let's make a new start Cause everybody's gotta die sometime yeah But baby don't cry 你已经得到了我的心 这才是最重要的 因为每个人都会死 我们也将分崩离析 让我们创造一个新的开始吧 因为每个人都会死 但我的宝贝请不要哭泣 Now possibilities I'd never considered Are occurring the likes of which I'd never heard Now an angry soul comes back from beyond the grave To repossess a body with which I'd misbehaved 现在发生了一件我无法想像的事 这件事情我从来没在哪里听过 一个愤怒的灵魂从墓地的远方归来 回到了我所玷污的肉体上 Smiling right from ear to ear Almost laughed herself to tears Must have stabbed him fifty fxxking times, I can't believe it Ripped his heart out right before his eyes, eyes over easy Eat it, eat it, eat it 笑容扯破了她的嘴角 就在她几乎被撕裂的笑脸上 必须要终结这个混帐杀千刀的贱命 就在他的眼前 撕出了它的心脏 然後吃了它 吃了它 吃了它 Now that it's done I realize the error of my ways I must venture back to apologize from somewhere far beyond the grave I gotta make up for what I've done Cause I was all up in a piece of heaven While you burned in hell, no peace forever 现在我终於领悟到了我所犯的错 我必须要冒险从这个墓地的远方归来以求你的原谅 我必须弥补我犯下的错误 因为当我在天堂的一角时 你却在地狱之中燃烧 永无安宁之日 Cause I really always knew that my little crime Would be cold that's why I got a heater for your thighs And I know, I know it's not your time but bye bye And a word to the wise when the fire dies You think it's over but it's just begun But baby don't cry 因为我真的随时记得我这小小的罪恶 就让我来为你变冷的双腿加热 而我知道 我知道对你来说这实在不幸 但仍要向你道别 在激情退却之後才是真正的高潮 你觉得这已经结束但这只是个开始 但我的宝贝别哭 You had my heart, at least for the most part Cause everybody's gotta die sometime, we fell apart Let's make a new start Cause everybody's gotta die sometime yeah yeah But baby don't cry 你已经得到了我的心 这才是最重要的 因为每个人都会死 我们也将会分离 让我们创造一个新的开始吧 因为每个人都会死 但我的宝贝请不要哭泣 I will suffer for so long (What will you do, not long enough) To make it up to you (I pray to God that you do) I'll do whatever you want me to do (Well then I'll break you unchained) And if it's not enough (If it's not enough, it's not enough) If it's not enough (Not enough) Try again (Try again) And again (And again) Over and over again 我将用很长的时间来赎罪 (你要怎麽做?或许那还不够长) 来弥补对你所犯的过错 (我祈祷你真的去做) 我会做任何你希望我去做的事情 (那麽我将再给你一次机会) 如果这还是不够 (不够) 我将继续做下去 (继续做下去) 再继续下去 (再继续下去) 一次在一次的做下去 We're coming back, coming back We'll live forever, live forever Let's have wedding, have a wedding Let's start the killing, start the killing 我们回来了 我们回来了 我们将会永远活着 永远活着 我们要举办一场婚礼 一场婚礼 让我们大开杀戒 大开杀戒 (Do you take this man in death for the rest of your unnatural life? yes I do Do you take this woman in death for the rest of your unnatural life I do I now pronounce you...) (你愿与这名男子携手 停留在死亡之中 共度这不自然的一生吗? 是的 我愿意 你愿与这名女子携手 停留在死亡之中 共度这不自然的一生吗? 我愿意 那麽我宣布你们...) Cause I really always knew that my little crime Would be cold that's why I got a heater for your thighs And I know, I know it's not your time but bye bye And a word to the wise when the fire dies You think it's over but it's just begun But baby don't cry 因为我真的随时记得我这小小的罪恶 就让我来为你变冷的双腿加热 而我知道 我知道对你来说这实在不幸 但仍要向你道别 在激情退却之後才是真正的高潮 你觉得这已经结束但这只是个开始 但我的宝贝别哭 You had my heart, at least for the most part Cause everybody's gotta die sometime, we fell apart Let's make a new start Cause everybody's gotta die sometime yeah But baby don't cry 你已经得到了我的心 这才是最重要的 因为每个人都会死 我们也将会分离 让我们创造一个新的开始吧 因为每个人都会死 但我的宝贝请不要哭泣... －－－－－－ 算是满长的一首歌，写日文作文的时候觉得很烦，为了转换心情翻了一下，结果不由 自主的把它翻完了XD 你说作文怎麽办?就当他是愚人节的笑话吧( *〞▽〝)/ And a word to the wise when the fire dies 这句我一直翻不好 望请板上大贤指导 上篇B.Y.O.B.的翻译经过研究後决定采用版友的版本，在此叩谢。 -- ◢◤◢◤◥◥◣ ●? ● █ ▊ ◢ █▅ ● 重复播放到恼人的音乐，无病呻吟到作呕的文字， ● ◣◣ ◥◤◢◢◢ ζ ● 最苦的咖啡香及烟味。 ● ◢◥▆▃▂▃▆◤◤◢ ● ● █◣ ◢█◥◣ ψyunca ◥█▆▅▄▅▆█◤ ◥◣ ● http://blog.yam.com/mk13 ● ●˙‧． --

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