作者vaakaa (我要欧趴)
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标题Re: [问题] 和国外教授写信
时间Tue Oct 20 10:48:25 2015
※ 引述《evilove (愿意感动就是一种享受)》之铭言:
: My two cents....
: 我会重新调整为
: I am writing this letter to apply for.....I am currently...
: 删除 "My name is vaakaa" 这是中文逻辑
Dear Professor Dr. Eibert:
I am writing this letter to apply for a position as a visiting researcher
at the Institute for High-Frequency Engineering. I am currently a third-year
Ph.D. candidate in Communication Engineering and focusing on the research of
leaky wave antennas at the National Chiao Tung University, Taiwan.
: Topics方式的列点,我会改成一两句完整句子去描述对方的研究,要那种一写就中
: 对方研究的核心的感觉,对方publish在哪里不重要可以略去。
: 同样的自己的研究也是建议用完整句子描述,这时候publish在哪里才重要。
: 逻辑上,我会将自己的研究放前面,然後才连结自己研究与对方的研究的关联。
: 策略上,我会建议是让对方觉得可以从你身上学到东西,目前还看不到你的自信。
因为老师其实做另外一块领域比较多,
所以我这次改写得有点厚脸皮,变成是从他做的一块领域切到和我相关的
觉得不太妥当但不知道怎麽改
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I have read some of your works on the analysis of complex periodic structures
and their application in leaky wave antennas. I am now interested in novel
design techniques for improving the performance of leaky wave antennas and
one of my research results has been accepted in IEEE TAP in August 2015. It will
be my honor if I can join your research team.
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: : I am applying for a grant that allows my stay for an academic year at a
: : German university working on my research project. With the grant, the
: : Ministry of Science and Technology, R.O.C. (MOST) and the Deutscher
: : Akademischer Austausch Dienst (DAAD) will subsidize me to stay in Germany.
: 这一段我不太明白你要表达的意思以及与你应徵这个工作的关系?
: : Attached is my curriculum vitae for your reference. Thank you very much for
: : your time and consideration, and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
: : Sincerely Yours.
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: : (注1:IEEE TAP和IEEE MTT是这位老师应该熟知的期刊缩写)
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1F:推 Armuro: 我觉得最後一句有点突兀 感觉在那之前要多一点连结说你跟 10/20 11:34
2F:→ Armuro: 他们lab的研究有什麽联结. 10/20 11:34
3F:→ vaakaa: 有点参不透...是说第一句的连结可能还不够,後面要加强? 10/20 13:09
4F:推 Armuro: 意思就是说不够具体说明你为什麽想加入 还有加入可以带来 10/20 22:14
5F:→ Armuro: 什麽正面影响 10/20 22:14
6F:推 jabari: 三明治 是你有奖学金的意思吗?? 有的话写在第一段 10/20 22:49