作者evilove (愿意感动就是一种享受)
看板PhD
标题Re: [问题] 和国外教授写信
时间Tue Oct 20 09:38:45 2015
My two cents....
: Dear Professor Dr. Eibert:
: My name is vaakaa, currently a third-year Ph.D. candidate in Communication
: Engineering at the National Chiao Tung University, Taiwan. I am focusing on
: the research of leaky wave antennas and interested in applying for a position
: as a visiting researcher at the Institute for High-Frequency Engineering.
我会重新调整为
I am writing this letter to apply for.....I am currently...
删除 "My name is vaakaa" 这是中文逻辑
: I have read some of your great articles published at the IEEE TAP and IEEE
: MTT which covers a wide range of topics, including numerical and theoretical
: electromagnetics, advanced RF measurement techniques, MIMO antenna and leaky
: wave antenna designs. I am also interested in the design of leaky wave
: antennas and one of my research results has been accepted in IEEE TAP in
: August 2015. It will be my honor if I can join your research team.
Topics方式的列点,我会改成一两句完整句子去描述对方的研究,要那种一写就中
对方研究的核心的感觉,对方publish在哪里不重要可以略去。
同样的自己的研究也是建议用完整句子描述,这时候publish在哪里才重要。
逻辑上,我会将自己的研究放前面,然後才连结自己研究与对方的研究的关联。
策略上,我会建议是让对方觉得可以从你身上学到东西,目前还看不到你的自信。
: I am applying for a grant that allows my stay for an academic year at a
: German university working on my research project. With the grant, the
: Ministry of Science and Technology, R.O.C. (MOST) and the Deutscher
: Akademischer Austausch Dienst (DAAD) will subsidize me to stay in Germany.
这一段我不太明白你要表达的意思以及与你应徵这个工作的关系?
: Attached is my curriculum vitae for your reference. Thank you very much for
: your time and consideration, and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
: Sincerely Yours.
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: (注1:IEEE TAP和IEEE MTT是这位老师应该熟知的期刊缩写)
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1F:推 bm701: +1 同意 都讲到关键修改重点 10/20 10:12
2F:推 vaakaa: 感谢前辈.除了第二点我还在想具体该怎麽改之外,最後一点是 10/20 10:13
3F:→ vaakaa: 试着讲我在申请DAAD的计画,若顺利过去就有补助,这样老师 10/20 10:15
4F:→ vaakaa: 可能比较想收我吧 10/20 10:16