除了我自己的疏忽外~~~ 这个reviewer真的觉得我的文章写得粉烂吧~~~~ JPP我也已经上了两篇了~~没想到第3篇打击这麽大~~~~~ 再找别篇期刊吧~~~~~ Reviewer(s)' Comments to Author: Reviewer: 1 Comments to the Author Written English needs vast improvement. At present the grammar/language is of an unacceptably low quality. References. Ref 2: Herman, K. should by Krier, H. - you've got the names backwards. Ref 3: you have a problem with the quotations. Refs 4-8 are completely unrelated to the present work; they are just FEM papers in different thermal stress applications. Reference work relevant to your manuscript. Previous work on FEM/thermal calculations and stress/thermal measurements in rocket motors, insulators, and propellant grains. Value. What is the value or novelty of this work? The authors have applied a heat transfer condition to the inside of an annulus and performed a black box ANSYS FEM calculation for the stress distribution in the annulus. In my opinion, this is not a publishable result but rather an undergraduate student project. The results are not generalized for non-specific materials, variation in motor case thickness, etc. I see very little value in this work. The limited results are specific to the chosen parameters and this can be easily done by nearly anyone with ANSYS and a BS in mechanical engineering. Technical. What is the applied pressure on the insulator? I assume zero. This is purely a thermal stress calculation? Why vary insulator thickness but not also motor case thickness? Won't this influence the 0.6 cm thickness criteria for insulator thickness? Why the sharp changes in stress in the first 4 seconds? You should show a thermal loading (temperature, heat flux, other) graph to explain. But my biggest problem is that this work lacks value for nearly all readers. This is simple black box FEM analysis on a thermally loaded annulus. Reviewer: 2 Comments to the Author (There are no comments.) --

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