如题 这是课堂作业的一个短文 内容是写我去大陆玩 想请问有没有什麽真的太严重的文法错误呢?? Last summer vacation, I travel to China and stayed my sister’s house a month. Before I back to Taiwan, I travel to Hong Kong for 3 days with my sister, sister’ husband and they baby. We stayed in the Prudential Hotel in Jordan on Nathan Road. It’s near Temple Street, Ladies Market, Harbor City, Lang-ham Place and a lot of famous spots and very convenient. Mass Transit Railway (MTR) is convenient in Hong Kong. So we can take the MTR to anywhere and just spend in a minutes. There is very large, clean and the signpost is very clearly. When we took it from Tsim Sha Tsui station to Central station, I was almost lost in there with my family. It’s very funny and thrilling. When you to go to Hong Kong, you must try a piece of Hong Kong waffle. That small booth sells Hong Kong waffle in Nathan Road too. It’s near our hotel. Because it was a lot of magazine and news reported and celebrity’s introduction, so we bought it in there. It’s really delicious under our expectation and the texture is very different than Taiwan. Night scenes of Hong Kong are three top in the word. We took the peak tram to Peak Tower to saw the view and I’m deeply touched by it. There is Madame Tussauds Hong Kong on the Peak Tower’ downstairs. It’s so expensive, so we didn’t enter there and only took some photos in outside. I hope I can to go in there next time. This time, we just went to a few spots in Hong Kong, so I hope I can go to more spots in there next time. 大半夜劳烦各位了! 感谢! --

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