※ 引述《PttBSL (情人箭)》之铭言： : 中国作家英文小说将在纽约自由女神旁举行新书发布会 2006-02-12 : http://dailynews.muzi.com/news/ll/fanti/1405531.shtml : 以下仅节录提及古龙部分 离题一下，金庸的《书剑恩仇录》旧版很早就有英译版了。 一年多前发现英译版时，小弟我可是相当兴奋啊，举出个人印象最深刻的霍青桐出 场的那一段来说明吧。 只见数十匹骆驼夹着二三十匹马﹐乘者都是回人﹐高鼻深目﹐满脸浓须。头缠白布﹐ 腰悬弯刀。回族商人从回部到关内做生意﹐事属常有﹐陆菲青也不以为异。突然间 眼前一亮﹐一个黄衫女郎骑了一匹青马﹐纵骑小跑﹐轻驰而过。那女郎秀美中透着 一股英气﹐光采照人﹐当真是丽若春梅绽雪﹐神如秋蕙披霜﹐两颊融融﹐霞映澄塘﹐ 双目晶晶﹐月射寒江。陆菲青见那回族少女人才出众﹐不过多看了一眼﹐李沅芷却 瞧得呆了。她自幼生长西北边寒﹐一向也没见过几个头脸齐整的女子﹐更别说如此 好看的美人了。那少女和她年事相仿﹐大约也是十八九岁﹐腰插匕首﹐长辨垂肩﹐ 一身鹅黄衫子﹐头戴金丝绣的小帽﹐帽边插了一根长长的翠绿羽毛﹐革履青马﹐旖 旎如画。 想想，这几句「那女郎秀美中透着一股英气﹐光采照人﹐当真是丽若春梅绽雪﹐神 如秋蕙披霜﹐两颊融融﹐霞映澄塘﹐双目晶晶﹐月射寒江」怎麽翻译呢？ 这应该比李清照声声慢的前三句简单一些，但也不容易吧。如何翻译，我可是一点 概念都没有啊！怎麽兼顾句式的美感与简洁呢？实在太令人期待了！ 我们来对照英文版吧： The caravan consisted of dozens of camels with 20 or 30 horses squeezed in between them, all ridden by Muslims with high noses and sunken eyes. They had thick beards on their faces and white cloths tied around their heads. Scimitars hung from their waists. Muslim traders were a common sight on the road to the central areas and Lu did not consider it unusual. Amidst the group, he noticed a graceful young girl, dazzlingly beautiful, dressed in yellow robes and riding a black horse. Lu was impressed, but did no more than glance at her. Yuanzhi, however, stared in open-mouthed wonder. Growing up in the northwest border areas, she had seen few well-groomed girls, let alone girls as beautiful as this one. She was about the same age as Yuanzhi, 18 or 19, with a dagger at her waist and long braids hanging down over her shoulders. She wore a full-length yellow gown, leather boots and a small hat embroidered with gold silk, on the side of which was fastened a turquoise feather. She was an enchanting sight. 嗯嗯，找到了吗？ 答案是：　 ...dazzlingly beautiful... 秀美中透着一股英气﹐光采照人﹐当真是丽若春梅绽雪﹐神如秋蕙披霜﹐ 两颊融融﹐霞映澄塘﹐双目晶晶﹐月射寒江 = dazzlingly beautiful !!! 还真是SHOCK的译笔啊！！　=.= --- 连圆周率都可以变成3了。　 -- 我走过山的时候山不说话，我路过海的时候海不说话， 我坐着的毛驴一步一步滴滴答答，我带着的倚天瘖哑。 大家说我因为爱着杨过大侠，找不到所以在峨嵋安家， 其实我只是喜欢峨嵋的雾，像十六岁那年绽放的烟花。 ──小东邪郭襄 　　作者：北大未名AngleMiao --

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