作者Trion (Trion)
看板EngTalk
标题[Poem Translation] The Scar
时间Fri Mar 20 23:55:31 2009
Hi all,
One more time, we see again. This time I would like to
translate poem that illustrates one of the most popular
character in pili puppet show, 叶小钗。
Sorry for typing its Chinese name instead of its English
name, Scar, that was used in the English version of pili
puppet show named "争王记", or "The tale of Wulin Warriors"
for I really hate the name although it somehow truely shows
what it meant in Chinese but actually lost some flavors after
dubbed and translated.
Anyway, cast it aside my personal feelings toward this name
translation and let's get to the point.
Below is my poem translation and see if any feedback will be
thrown. Any critics or comment is greatly appreciated. Thanks.
Oh, one more thing. I seperated this poem into two parts for
originally they should be two independant poems instead of one.
original poem:
征衣红尘化云烟 江湖落拓不知年
剑痴刀狂世纷云 今将衣钵卸双肩
踏尽千山无人识 当初枉受盛名牵
东风吹醒英雄梦 笑对青山万重天
Translated poem:
Vapor into sky
my armour and fight
I wander in the wild
without goal and guide
Where am I
and when is time ?
Paranoid me they call
Wild as I be known
with my blade and sword.
Till now I relieve my load
off the shoulder I bore
Carry it no more.
Over the thousand around
endless mountain I have gone.
People recognize me none.
Alas, for whatever I gained,
it's all driven for fame,
misguided by name.
Winds blow my way,
rise to awake,
my pursue for fame,
for heroes have no name.
Therefore I am,
waken from fame,
smile and tame,
To the mountain in the horizon.
Original poem:
爱落红尘心已死 持刀抱剑了一生
My love is no more
in this mundane world .
Therefore I can only hold
my blade and sword
till the end of my world.
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