作者sevensad (知名不俱)
看板Eng-Class
标题[请益] 请问我这样写是对的吗？
时间Tue May 21 12:10:17 2019
想请问我这样写对吗？外国人看得懂吗
Would you like take some photos or videos?
Or would you loke to know that is there anything delicious around here?
Les’t be friends.
主要是要打在名片上发给来台湾旅游的外国人
想传达的是 我可以提供帮他们拍照或是录影的服务
也可以加好友纯聊天 介绍美食或是观光景点给他们等等
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1F：推 timmy999: 你要不要再检查一次05/21 12:50
2F：→ A1right: 我认为你顺序有问题 应该是先问是否想知道美食景点资讯05/21 13:07
3F：→ A1right: 直接问人家要不要拍照 很奇怪吧....05/21 13:07
这是名片的背面 正面有写我们是摄影工作室
4F：推 donvito: Les开头 还以为是法文05/21 13:10
5F：→ donvito: 是说Let's be friends.这样的句子很怪05/21 13:14
6F：→ donvito: 不如用 祝有美好的一天 祝在台湾旅游愉快 之类的05/21 13:15
7F：→ donvito: 第一句少to;loke错字,後面关系子句怪怪的且应该用if子句05/21 13:20
IF子句如何改写呢？抱歉有点不懂
If you would like to know is there anything delicious around here?
8F：→ hlin12: 看到这些会让人觉得你目的是在卖东西...05/21 13:31
9F：→ donvito: 楼上说的很有道理XD05/21 13:33
是在卖东西没错哦 主要是卖摄影服务为优先(前面已说明)
只是想补充说 如果不需要也没关系 也可以为他介绍台湾美食等等
改成这样呢
Would you like to take some photos or videos?
Or if you would like to know is there anything delicious around here?
Maybe we can put each other as a friend. (这样说会太不礼貌吗？)
Have a nice day.
※ 编辑: sevensad (182.235.184.243), 05/21/2019 14:28:44
10F：推 seednet2: 两个动词不能一起,like拼写,疑问句不倒装 05/21 15:15
改成这样对吗？like拼写有点不懂。。。
Or if you would like to know anything delicious around here,
maybe we can put each other as a friend.
11F：→ hlin12: 如果是卖东西的话，这句子太平庸...05/21 18:27
因为是名片不是DM 不需吸引人注意 只想简单的传达想表达的事
感谢大家的指教 请问改成这样对吗
Would you like to take some photos or videos?
Or if you would like to know anything delicious around here,
maybe we can put each other as a friend.
Have a nice day.
※ 编辑: sevensad (182.235.184.243), 05/21/2019 22:38:11
12F：→ kaifrankwind: 这名片是多大张啊05/22 11:10
13F：→ kaifrankwind: 我的意思是，名片版面小，顶多用动词片语就好啦…05/22 11:12
14F：→ frank4133: Do的意思是 Would you like to know if there is...05/22 16:40
15F：→ frank4133: 而且照你真正的意思 第一句不应该是那样吧05/22 16:44
16F：→ frank4133: Would you like someone to take pictures for/of you?05/22 16:46
17F：→ frank4133: maybe we can put each other as a friend也蛮奇怪的 05/22 16:48
原来如此 太感谢了
maybe we can put each other as a friend这句我想表达我们可以加line好友
在网路上查到的是 put you as a friend这句 然後稍微修改了一下
请问怎麽改会比较好呢 或是外国人不说这个？
※ 编辑: sevensad (27.246.225.62), 05/24/2019 17:48:18