※ 引述《linzh (= =)》之铭言： : ※ 引述《AppleRam (苹果羊咩咩)》之铭言： : : 这篇是有关美国陪审团的文章 这一句我一直翻的不满意 : : 有请英文强者解救 ＠＠ 感谢～ : : This legislative history shows that congressional commitment to the : : cross-sectional ideal was more qualified than the bold policy declaration : : with which the statute opens might otherwise have indicated. : : 这个立法历程显示国会对於跨阶层理想的致力更符合法条精神，而非只是像条文看似指称 : : 的大胆政策宣言。 : : = : : 谢谢热心的大家～ : the bold policy declaration with which the statute opens : => the statute opens with the bold policy declaration : 也就是说the statute开头宣告了一段 bold policy declaration : 所以是...than the bold policy declaration might otherwise have indicated : 而might otherwise have indicated则是意指这段宣言指出跟前面所提到 : "congressional commitment to cross-sectional ideal was more qualified"不同(或 : 相反)的情况 例如 congressional commitment to cross-sectional ideal was less : qualified or something else would be more qualified...(因为没有更多的上下文所 : 以不知道这个宣言指出什麽) : 所以你的翻译我会修正为: : 立法历程显示国会致力於cross-sectional ideal，相较此法条开头阐述的大胆政策宣言所 : 另指之情形而言更为qualified(?) : 翻译得没有很好 但我已尽力表达我对这句子的解读了 希望不会太复杂orz : 另外cross-sectional ideal是说a concept of producing a jury that best represents : the commuity 所以你可以斟酌应该怎翻成中文才好 : 以上供你参考 欢迎指教 补充一下lintz大的解释 legislative history = 立法历程 ok congressional commitment to X = 国会对 X 的支持 cross-sectional ideal 没有 context 翻不出来 qualified 在此指「保守」 bold policy declaration = 大胆的政策宣言 This legislative history shows that congressional commitment to the cross-sectional ideal was more qualified than the bold policy declaration with which the statute opens might otherwise have indicated. This legislative history shows = 从立法历程来看 congressional commitment to the cross-sectional ideal was [more] qualified = 国会对 cross-sectional ideal 持保守支持态度 (重点在 qualified = 保守) more...than 是比较词，比较的是 qualified commitment vs. bold declaration the bold policy declaration with which the statute opens = 法案开头的大胆宣言 整句： 立法历程显示，国会对 cross-sectional ideal 的支持程度，其实并不像该法案起头 的宣言一样大胆，反而较为保守。 或者： 相较该法案起头的大胆宣言，立法历程显示国会对 cross-sectional ideal 的支持 程度其实是较保守的。 文笔请原po自己修~ -- 'Cause it's a bittersweet symphony, this life Trying to make ends meet, You're a slave to money then you die -Bittersweet Symphony, The Verve --

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