作者hoch (Sanctuary)
看板Eng-Class
标题Re: [请益] 两篇英检中级翻译请大大批改 感谢!
时间Fri Mar 30 09:53:50 2012
中级英检好像不会有这麽长的句子要翻译吧。不过我没考过不知道。
以下是用意译的角度来看这两句。不知道是不是我们
台湾的英文老师从小就强调中翻英一定要每一个字都翻出来,我觉得原po的翻译
完全拘泥在中文的语句顺序,用字和结构。个人感觉不很顺。
举例来说,原po觉得『翻得最卡』的地方之一 "to line up to pay the money"。
很显然原po无论如何一定要把『结帐』两个字翻出来。
: 昨天气象报导说两天後将有台风侵袭台湾。因为最近菜价上涨,林太太担心台风过後菜价
: 会再上涨,於是一早起床赶去超市。没想到已经挤满抢购人潮,最後她排队等了两个小时
: 才能结帐
: Yesterday,the weather forecast said that there wiil be a typhoon coming to
: Taiwan. Because the price of vegetable rose recently, Miss Lin worry about it will
: rise again after typhoon. So, she rushed to supermarket in the morning, but
: there were full of people who wanted to buy things.Finally, it took her two
: hours to line up to pay the money(这边翻的最卡).
A typhoon is forcast to hit the island of Taiwan in just two days, said the
Central Weather Bureau yesterday. Given the already high vegetable prices,
Mrs.Lin worried about another round of inflation due to market
manipulation. Thus she went to a local supermarket this morning in
the hope that she could get some leafy greens before they were
snapped up. Much to her surprise that the supermarket was already
packed by panic customers like Mrs.Lin, resulting in a long checkout
line that took her nearly two hours to finish the shopping.
: 上个月Jenny常常觉得很累,她才发现从学校毕业之後都没有运动,为了要有良好的运动
: 习惯, 她决定每天上班前去游泳半小时,她上班时更有精神,工作效率也更好,她同事们都很
: 惊讶,因为她全身看起来和以前不一样~
: Last month Jenny often felt tired, she found that she did not take exercise
: after graduated from school.In order to have the good habit of taking exercise,
: she decided to go swimming for half an hour before going to work everyday.(这句比较不会翻)She
: became more energetic and have more efficiency to do work. Her colleague were
: all surprised because she looked very different than before.
: 请各位大大帮我批改罗 感谢你们!
Last month Jenny realized that she has been bothered by a chronic fatigue
problem for quite some time. She attributed the problem to the lack of
regular exercises ever since she took the current full-time position.
Knowing that exercise produces enormous health benefits, she decided to take
a 30-minite swimming workout before going to work everyday. The exercise has
since transformed her into an energetic and highly efficient employee,
impressing all the colleagues in her office.
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1F:推 jt910203:谢谢你喔 我会注意的! 03/30 19:08