: 不好意思打扰各位了 小弟曾经发过一篇英文问题,被网友嘘的很惨 : 说我文章写很烂...小的蛮受伤的 不过不是来找找安慰,是来请益 : 各位专家,很烂吗? 烂(错)在哪? 以您的角度,我该如何改善? : 可以帮我润饰重打并且指出我用法哪不好的,P币50...(sorry, 穷人...) 这篇主要的问题我认为有两个 (1) 很多句子感觉上都是由中文硬翻成英文而来。 例如第一句 『has anyone known . ..』。 最後一句 『Please take ...』。 (2) 第一句和接下来的两句，好像完全无关。我不晓得你把他们放在 一起是怎样？整篇文章的文意都不通。 : Has anyone known that whether the computer science area 我不知道你用现在完成式的用意在哪？ Does anybody know whether Taiwan is the best country concerning the research and development environment of information technology? If yes, in what areas within the IT industry that Taiwan has the greatest competitive advantage? : in Taiwan is the toppest or not? (If it is true: then what : kind of aspects are the toppest: embedded system? networking?) 以下这两句和上文完全无关。而且这两句文意也不连贯。就是一整个 怪到不行。 : I think there still exist some great universities in Asia : not including Taiwan which offer better master courses and education. Given the advanced IT industry as the foundation, Taiwanese universities have long been known as the best ones in training undergraduate and graduate students in many computer-realted areas. Nevertheless in my opinion that other Asian universities also provide top rated education that are as competitive as those offered by the Taiwanese education system. : So, I wanna know what are these schools? Please take the schools : in Hong Kong, Singapore and China for example. 『so』放在开头有点怪。个人意见。 『wanna know』也很怪。 Thus could someone tell me the best universities in computer science in the areas of Hong Kong, Singapore and China? --

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