作者abc (BabyABC)
看板Eng-Class
标题[求译] CNN网站上一个段落
时间Sat Feb 25 13:28:12 2012
●求译片段:
Couple these trends with the devastating financial crisis, which hurt those
whose wealth was in basic stocks and first-time home purchases -- as opposed
to the wealthy who invested in insurance-backed securities, derivatives and
credit default swaps -- and you've bottomed out America's working class.
●求译原因:
(1)虽然看得懂在写什麽,但是由於原文使用的很长的关系代名词子句,所以无法如实
照翻於中文。
(2)bottom out大约知道意思,不过无法为最後一句写出很简洁的翻译。
●原文连结:
http://edition.cnn.com/2012/02/24/opinion/
shank-albrecht-manufacturing-jobs/index.html?hpt=hp_bn4
●求译者自译连结:
http://babybabyabc.blogspot.com/2012/02/blog-post_6652.html
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1F:推 yienjion:我觉得你译的不错耶 02/25 15:10
2F:→ dunchee:"看得懂在写什麽"->那麽这之後是用中文解释中文--你可以把 02/25 23:53
3F:→ dunchee:你自己的中文翻译当初稿,然後自行润词(必要时看台湾新闻 02/25 23:54
4F:→ dunchee:报导,看看报导同样事件的记者怎麽翻(其实很多记者翻得不 02/25 23:55
5F:→ dunchee:是很好,所以你可以自己再加以修饰/润词) 02/25 23:55
6F:→ dunchee:有时候查英汉辞典也有帮助 02/25 23:56