作者Dorismm (Doris)
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标题[文法] 请帮忙检查下段文句是否有文法上的错误
时间Sun Feb 12 02:19:58 2012
我想请板友帮忙检查看看,
1)下段文句是否有误?
It has been the best food I ever tasted that I can't forget the memorable
smell since my grandmother died.
2)若无文法上的错误,请问惯用语的话,是如何叙述的呢?
谢谢大家!
感谢!
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1F:推 YNWA:我个人会这样写 I can't forget its memorable and it's the 02/12 02:53
2F:→ YNWA:best dish I've ever tasted. 02/12 02:54
3F:→ YNWA:对不起 我写错了 请忽略上述乱七八糟的句子 02/12 02:54
4F:→ davidwu0123:文法有错 that的用法错误 这边只能用so that 02/12 08:53
5F:→ davidwu0123:或者是that去掉改成and都可以 that的关代用法错了 02/12 08:56
6F:→ davidwu0123:後半句 用了since就应该用完成式 不该用can't 02/12 08:57
7F:→ davidwu0123:要不然就把since改成 after 02/12 08:57
8F:→ YNWA:ya exactly. 我不知道我在干嘛...0rz 02/12 12:55
9F:→ Dorismm:谢谢回答的板友,我本来是想用It is....that.... 02/12 17:52
10F:→ Dorismm:强调的语句来加强,可是我以前学到的it is A that B 02/12 17:52
11F:→ Dorismm:A B 时态都是相同的,但是我想找一下是否有A B 时态不同的? 02/12 17:53
12F:→ Dorismm:使用方法? 02/12 17:53
13F:→ davidwu0123:你想用这句型必须先搞清楚that的用法 02/12 21:10
14F:→ davidwu0123:把that前後的两部分独立出来看 他们都已经是完整句子 02/12 21:11
15F:→ davidwu0123:一个句子里面怎麽会有两个完整的句子? 02/12 21:12
16F:→ davidwu0123:因此你这句话修改起来其实非常困难 是结构上的错误 02/12 21:12
17F:→ davidwu0123:真要用的话 个人会这样写 02/12 21:16
18F:→ davidwu0123:It just the food that my grandpa made has been the 02/12 21:18
19F:→ davidwu0123:most tasted food I've ever tasted 02/12 21:19
20F:→ davidwu0123:後面我就不写了 你可以看见你的句子结构非常复杂 02/12 21:20
21F:→ davidwu0123:我不建议写这样的句子来烧自己的脑细胞 其实并不漂亮 02/12 21:20
22F:→ davidwu0123:用两个句子来描述这句话都比较好也比较容易 02/12 21:21
23F:→ SetsunaLeo:可以用It is such ... that ... 02/12 21:38
24F:→ SetsunaLeo:或:It was the best food I've ever tasted, so much 02/12 21:39
25F:→ SetsunaLeo:so that I haven't been able to forget the smell 02/12 21:39
26F:→ SetsunaLeo:since my grandmother died. 02/12 21:39
27F:→ SetsunaLeo:so much so可以说是so that的变形 02/12 21:39
28F:→ dunchee:"是否有A B 时态不同的?"-> 有 参考: 02/13 05:38
30F:→ Dorismm:谢谢D大的提醒,A & B 合起来是完整句才能这样使用 02/13 07:44
31F:→ Dorismm:文法句构真的犯了大错耶>"< 谢谢 02/13 07:45
32F:→ Dorismm:谢谢S大推文建议 it is so...that..使文意更通顺 02/13 07:46
33F:→ Dorismm:谢谢Dunchee,我本来以为你连结提供的是别人的例子 02/13 07:47
34F:→ Dorismm:但看到第三张图,才知道这好像是你自己写的解说耶QQ 感动 02/13 07:47
35F:→ Dorismm:我後来决定把句子拆开了!!!我的改法如下,希望能好一点 02/13 07:47
36F:→ Dorismm:It was one of the best meals I had since my mother 02/13 07:49
37F:→ Dorismm:died. It was so memorable that I was caught up in 02/13 07:49
38F:→ Dorismm:the suitcases of memories time after time. 02/13 07:50
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