作者ely6231 (瀚)
看板Eng-Class
标题Re: [文法] 关於商业问句
时间Fri Feb 3 21:56:46 2012
※ 引述《dirrtybon (阿尼)》之铭言:
: 最近写信常常在结尾需要写到
: 有任何问题 请和我连系
: 我是写成 Any further questions, please feel free to contact with me.
: 但被人揪正缺少if主词做为开头
: 正确:If you have any questions, please feel free to contact with me.
: 我想请问若是以口头语来写的话
: 以Any further questions, 做为开头的句子
: 对英语系国家的人来说 他们有可能会如此简略吗?
: 亦或有没有其他简略的口语用法
商用信件等正式文件尽量避免使用较口语化的用词,所以纠正後的文句较恰当
而省略过後的any further questions?是一个问句,
做为开头句子有点奇怪,不会如此简略
"有任何问题 请和我连系"可以翻成
If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me.
Should you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me.
You are welcome to contact me if you have any questions or concerns.
简短的用法则可以用let
EX: Let me know if you have any (further) questions.
: 还有这句
: Any further questions about prices please continuing to contact with me,
: we could negociate.
: 这句文法对吗?? 假如不对的话,应该怎麽改比较恰当?
: 谢谢orz。
就文法来说可以改成
If you have any further questions about prices, please continue to contact me.
We could negotiate.
不过有点台式英语的味道XD
像中文我们常说"请持续和我连络"和"欢迎来信协商"没什麽问题
但直接翻成英文会感觉怪怪的
可以当成"对价格有任何问题 请和我连系"翻成
If you have any questions about prices, please contact me.
queries
也可以把价钱和问题分开写
Above/Below is our pice list. If you have any further questions, please......
"欢迎协商"部分有需要可以用
There is room for negotiation.
You are welcome to negotiate prices with us.
Prices are negotiable.
仅以一英文学习者的角度回答,希望有帮助~
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