作者kk04014 (阿助)
看板Eng-Class
标题[求译]the wind at dawn
时间Wed Feb 1 18:01:01 2012
And the wind, the wind went out to meet with the sun
At the dawn when the night was done,
And he racked the clouds in lofty disdain
As they flocked in his airy train.
And the earth was grey, and grey was the sky,
In the hour when the stars must die;
And the moon had fled with her sad, wan light,
For her kingdom was gone with night.
Then the sun upleapt in might and in power,
And the worlds woke to hail the hour,
And the sea stream’d red from the kiss of his brow,
There was glory and light enow.
To his tawny mane and tangle of flush Leapt the wind with a blast and a rush;
In his strength unseen, in triumph upborne,
Rode he out to meet with the morn!
风
那阵想遇见太阳的风
在夜晚结束後的黎明
当它满怀高傲的折磨着云朵
而他们就像羊群们再空中排成一列
当大地与天空都还是一片灰白
那星星彷佛殆逝的时刻
那月色悄悄的带着她的哀愁离去
在那苍白的光晕下
她的王国与黑夜一起消失而去
接着阳光奋力的升起
全世界为这一刻喝采而醒来
而那大海
淌着鲜红的海水
从他额头的一个吻
那里荣耀光满
他黄褐色的鬃毛 纠结的新芽
而风与一阵气流或一阵急流跳跃着
在他伟大力量中
他的能力是无法看透的
无法承受的胜利
引导着他遇见早晨
想问一下各为这样大致理解上有错吗?
然後上色那边有点不清楚意思请各位解惑 谢谢
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2F:→ dunchee:(特别是开头0到8秒处) 然後对照: 02/02 02:33
4F:→ dunchee:"his airy train"-> 众多云(朵)往同一方向移动(就像是搭乘 02/02 02:36
5F:→ dunchee:在train里头。什麽train? -> the wind(所以是用airy train 02/02 02:36
6F:→ dunchee:来形容) 02/02 02:36
8F:→ dunchee:verb-> 16 ... 02/02 02:38
9F:→ dunchee:这poem(的这部份)描述的就是一个(特定的/相信你也看过的) 02/02 02:41
10F:→ dunchee:自然现象,所以只要你翻出的来中文读起来也会让人(脑海中) 02/02 02:41
11F:→ dunchee:产生相同画面,这样子就行了 02/02 02:41