作者tengharold (RoadMan_A)
看板Eng-Class
标题Re: [请益] 做一些修改了,谢谢各位的帮忙!
时间Tue Jan 31 07:57:56 2012
※ 引述《kikigirl (草莓心)》之铭言:
: Good morning everyone. I'm Fansi . I am so excited to be here for your
My name is Fansi.
口语 I'm Fansi = I'm fancy = 我很花俏 XD
: interview.
: I was born in Hsinchu .I graduated from National Hsinchu University of
: Education ,and I major in Early Childhood Education. I used to work as a
majored
: preschool teacher in Hsinchu for five years. With ex-working experience, I
, for five years.
used to work...for five years 不好,用逗号隔开
While working there, I learned
teamwork.
[这样改你的句子变的太短,需要加一点东西,如 the importance of teamwork,
preparation, and cooperation 等等]
: have learned how to work in a team.
: I'm easygoing `friendly and responsible . In my spare time, I like to watch
, friendly, and responsible.
: movies、cook and reading. Traveling is the best choice to enrich my life.
, cook, and read. I also love to travel, I think it's a great way to
enrich my life.
[I'm easygoing, I like to do X, 那继续 I 下去反而轻松]
: I believe that life can be lively and meaningful. I want to meet different
exciting
"life can be lively" 有点搞笑
: people and learn from them. By working in Taiwan High Speed Rail Corporation
I think working in THSRC would be a dream job
for me.
: can realize my dream. So that's why I am here. Thank you for your attention.
如果这只是讲来证明「我会英文」那差不多这样就可以了。
但是这一段从头到尾下来不到一分钟,如果真的要用来自介那内容不足。
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