作者kikigirl (草莓心)
看板Eng-Class
标题[请益] 不好意思~补上自介内容
时间Mon Jan 30 23:07:43 2012
Good morning everyone. I’m Fansi . I am very glad to be here for your
interview. I was born in Hsinchu. I graduated from National Hsinchu
University of Education ,and I major in Early Childhood Education. I used to
work as a preschool teacher in Hsinchu for five years. Now I am a housekeeper
and live in Taipei with my husband .
I‘m easygoing and friendly . In my spare time, I like to see a movie、travel
、cook and read books.
I believe that life can be lively and meaningful. I want to meat more people
and learn from them. By working in Taiwan High Speed Rail Corporation can
realize my dream. So that’s why I am here. Thank you for your attention.
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1F：推 shefans0530:1.see a movie->watch movies,2.遇见：meet非meat 01/30 23:16
2F：→ shefans0530:cook後面是想表达阅读吗？若是，个人觉得reading更好 01/30 23:17
3F：→ shefans0530:个人看到的一些小问题，有讲错欢迎指正。 01/30 23:18
4F：→ kanakanavu:我觉得一般的自我介绍和job interview的有分别... 01/30 23:19
5F：→ kanakanavu:我觉得你应该要站在工作角度来强调你的过去经验的连结 01/30 23:20
6F：→ kanakanavu:关於前面个人背景简介提到家管还有老公这点建议省略.. 01/30 23:22
7F：→ kikigirl:谢谢各位的建议，我会修改的 01/30 23:48
8F：→ kikigirl:不过之前做的是幼教，可能跟高铁的工作较没友直接的相关 01/30 23:54
9F：推 kanakanavu:我觉得你可以从幼教工作的热忱和奉献牺牲来表达的你的 01/31 01:07
10F：→ kanakanavu:服务态度，会是一个亮点。面试常常是一个点打对了... 01/31 01:08
11F：→ kanakanavu:就找到工作了... 01/31 01:08
12F：→ hoch:推k大。雇主不会在乎你可不可以『实现你的梦想』。他们在乎 01/31 08:34
13F：→ hoch:的是雇用你可不可以对公司有帮助。 01/31 08:35
14F：→ hoch:所以最後一段要重写。 01/31 08:35
15F：→ kanakanavu:...其实我觉得电影、旅游那些都可以不提，除非和工作有 01/31 15:56
16F：→ kanakanavu:相关性，如海外旅游增进和国际人士的沟通和了解... 01/31 15:56