※ 引述《goingon (无)》之铭言： : I would talk about my friend, Sara. She is my college classmate. When I was ^ like to 这边看起来是你想介绍Sara跟你的关系 : in my first year in college, my leg got hurt in a basketball game and I was : unable to walk then. Moreover, I lived alone outside the school and my family : was not there. It was a hard time. I was depressed(沮丧的) because I thought : no one would help me. Surprisingly(出乎我预料的), Sara offered her helping hand : (伸出援手). She rode a bicycle took me to classes and helped me with trivial 伸出援手=帮忙：Sara helped me / Sara gave me a hand : things in my daily life(生活琐事). That is really important to me. I will 生活琐事=生活大小事：every little thing. : never forget how generous she was when I was in need for someone’s help(在我 : 真的需样帮助的时候). : 括号的地方有查过然後选择可能的用法，但不知道有没有用对? : 希望板上的大家可以帮我看看! 可以这样写，但文章有点不顺…你现在还是大学生吗？还是已经毕业了？ I would like to talk about my friend, Sara, who was my college classmate. During my first year in college, I hurted my leg in a basketball game and I was unable to walk. Worse thing is that I lived offcampus alone. It was a difficult time, coz i don't have family there. I was a freshman, therefore I didn't have good friend. Surprisingly, Sara gave me great help by riding me to school by bicycle, and also helped me on every little thing. It touched me deeply. I will never forget how kind and generous she was when i was in need. 可能还是有些文法错误？但我会这样写~ -- http://blog.yam.com.tw/liububble061 --

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