作者Wooowo (p-p-p Poker face)
看板Eng-Class
标题[请益] 写给一封给国外朋友的mail...
时间Sun Oct 16 21:36:34 2011
Hello, XXX
How are you?
Thanks for you took us to go around the places when we traveled to South Korea.
I was relly happy to meet you.
Did you have to receive the gift ?
If you didn't , please reply the letter and I can send it again.
Tomorrow is Monday Blue.
It's relly lets me don't want to work, so we go go fighting!!
这样可以吗？文法是否有异状呢？
初次写给对方，请各位不吝指教！
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1F：→ jacqueswu:Did you have to receive...文法很怪~Have you received 10/16 21:54
2F：→ Wooowo:请问J大，那句只要改成Have you receive the gift ? 10/16 21:57
3F：推 allesvorbei:Thanks for+N travel+in(在XX旅游)，to表示你还没去 10/16 22:01
4F：→ allesvorbei:Monday Blue反了 It's relly lets不能重复动词 10/16 22:02
5F：→ allesvorbei:so we go go fighting语气上不对or会比较好 10/16 22:03
6F：→ Wooowo:那第三次该如何改写呢？ (我已经去回来了) 10/16 22:08
7F：→ Wooowo:当我们去韩国旅游，很谢谢那天他带我们去很韩国很多地方玩 10/16 22:09
8F：→ hoch:Thanks for taking me to many fun places in South Korea. 10/16 23:04
9F：→ hoch:I really appreciate your hospitality. 10/16 23:05
10F：→ hoch:Please let me know if you haven't received my gift. I'll 10/16 23:06
11F：→ hoch:send it again. 10/16 23:06
12F：→ hoch:Tomorrow is blue Monday. It is the most depressing day 10/16 23:09
13F：→ hoch:of a week. I wish I wouldn't have to go to office 10/16 23:10
14F：→ hoch:tomorrow. 10/16 23:10
15F：→ Wooowo:感谢H大，英文实在太破了，都用中文来想英文谢谢！ 10/16 23:17
16F：推 heziying:我知道你想说的gogo fighting是韩文的'加油' 我建议你就 10/17 02:58
17F：→ heziying:直接说甚麽Have a great week!Fighting!!之类的 10/17 02:59
18F：→ heziying:或Let's have a great week!Fighting! 不然他会把句子 10/17 02:59
19F：→ heziying:看成"我们去打架吧"的意思... 10/17 03:00