作者piggylover75 ()
看板Eng-Class
标题[请益] 请帮我看一下翻译句子
时间Thu Oct 6 23:09:05 2011
最近在练写作
想先从主旨(thesis)和段落主题句(topic sentence)着手
题目:
Do you prefer to live in a big city or in a small city
Thesis:
I prefer to live in a big city because of better transportation and more
working choices.
Topic sentences:
1.Take Taipei city for instence, there are bus stops or MRT stations
everywhere.
2.Also, a big city could offer variety of working(job?) vacancy.
中文:
我比较喜欢住在大城市因为有较好的交通与较多的工作选择
以台北市举例来说,公车站牌与捷运站到处可见
大城市可以提供多样性的职缺
就我所知topic sentence是用来支持扩充thesis的
所以把thesis提到的论点放在topic sentence再论述
不知道这样用对不对
请大家帮我看一下
谢谢!!
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1F:→ ShiningRuby:working choice改成job choice 10/07 15:24
2F:→ piggylover75:谢谢:) 10/08 23:01