作者tengharold (RoadMan_A)
看板Eng-Class
标题Re: [求译] 请帮我看看我翻的论文摘要
时间Thu Oct 6 00:58:57 2011
※ 引述《tekamolo (徵求昵称)》之铭言:
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: 南管与崑曲的遇合-「心心南管乐坊」梨园乐舞《霓裳羽衣》初探
: Nanguan meets Kunqu - A Preliminary Study of Li-Yuan Music And Dance, the
: "Ni-Shang-Yu-Yi" of XinXin Nanguan Ensemble.
光看英文,搞不懂「心心南管乐坊」、梨园乐舞、与《霓裳羽衣》三者之间的关系。
对英语读者,除非深谙台湾近年传统舞团及表演项目 (这种人应该直接看中文吧XD),
不然从标题看来会认为你 Study 的目标是梨园乐舞,然後《霓裳羽衣》与心心南管乐坊
不知道是干嘛的...
我两厅院的会员卡已经过期很久了 ( ̄□ ̄|||)a
我看来《霓裳羽衣》很明显是舞、「心心南管乐坊」与梨园乐舞则不太确定
我只能模拟两可的改一下标题
... A preliminary study of "Ni-Shang-Yu-Yi," a dance performed in the Li-Yuan
music and dance tradition, and produced by XinXin Nanguan Ensemble
: 上承汉、唐演唱形式与音乐体制,千百年来在闽南地区流传的南管,随着移民的播迁来台
: ,以清雅悠远的乐声,细致典雅的剧影以及亲切谐趣的爨弄,进驻於台湾子民的生活版图
: 之中。
: Following the performance and music's style of hang/tang-dynasty, nanguan
musical ... Han and Tang dynasties, Nanguan
: has been spread in min-nang area in thousands of years. It accompanies the
spreading in the Min-nang area (i.e. southern Fujian)
for over two thousand years. It followed early
: emigrants to Taiwan and took root in their life with its graceful music,
Chinese immigrants to Taiwan, and... lives...
: refined dramas and interesting acts.
(这里 acts 是要表达甚麽?我中文造诣不足,看不懂上面
的「爨弄」)
以上纯改英文,如果要我翻译我会整段重写。
[在这里我想骂一下中文作文的习惯。
音乐「清雅」我可以接受,但「悠远」是怎样,千里传音比大声吗?这里不是说原po
写的不好,而是中文那种形容词一直往上堆的作文习惯对翻译来说真是噩梦 XD。
下面再来一个细致典雅,好,我可以 delicate, classical and graceful...
再下面呢?「亲切谐趣」,$%@#... ]
: 而纵横了明清剧坛数百余载,秉持着文学创作的抒情传统,承继了南北曲牌联套的
: 音乐体制,发展出形神合一家门表演艺术的崑曲,从有清以来从彼岸流传来台,以
:「戏曲美典」的优雅身姿在宝岛茁壮发展。
: Kunqu had dominated the drama field in ming/qing dynasty. It inherits not only
On the other hand, Kunqu had dominated drama for hundreds of years, spanning
the Ming and Qing dynasties, as the inheritor of both the lyric tradition of
literature and the musical
: the lyric tradition of literature but also the music system of qupail and song
system of Qupail (请解释曲牌连套), and developing from these two rich artforms
its unique performance style best summarized by the phrase "unity of form and
spirit."
["发展出形神合一家门表演艺术"那一段怎麽不见了]
: sets. Now kunqu flourishes in Taiwan as a "Xi-Qu-Mei-Dien,"
Kunqu (戏曲美典是专有名词还是形容词?)
: since it spread from China to Taiwan in Qing dynasty.
since its arrival during the Qing dynasty.
改到这里,想请问原po这真的是学术文章吗?越看越像写来卖票的专栏。。。
: 二十一世纪「心心南管乐坊」绾和崑曲与南管,制作
: 了洋溢古典诗意的《霓裳羽衣》梨园乐舞,让观众为之惊艳不已。究竟这出艺术跨界的舞
: 作,其创作思维与演出景观为何?
: In the 21st century, XinXin Nanguan Ensemble combined kunqu with nanguan,
Kunqu Nanguan,
: produced "Ni-Shang-Yu-YI" with classic lyric meaning, which stunned the
and produced "Ni-Shang-Yu-Yi," charming audiences far and wide.
[X,看到这里才确定「心心南管乐坊」原来是制作,但梨园乐舞仍然不知是什。
请解释梨园乐舞,不然前面标题翻不出来]
: audiences. After all, what are the thoughts and performances of this dance?
What thoughts and considerations went into the creation, choreo-
graphy and production of this dance?
: 而同样被联合国教科文组织列为「人类口述和非物质文
: 化遗产代表作」的南管与崑曲,在台湾舞台上的遇合,所意味的「在地」美学意蕴与文化
: 价值又是为何?这是本文拟试图探究的。
: Both listed as the Intangible Cultural Heritage (UNESCO),
Furthermore, what might the blend of Nanquan and Kunqu (both listed on the
UNESCO List of Intangible Cultural Heritage) mean 'locally' in terms of
: nanquan and kunqu meet in the stage in Taiwan.
: What is its "local" aesthetic meaning and culture value?
aesthetics and cultural value? This is another area that we would like to
explore.
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1F:推 hoch:推t大。『清雅悠远』这类虚无缥渺的词真的是恶梦。 10/06 08:55
2F:推 tekamolo:谢谢 我看到了 我研究一下 ^^ 10/06 11:31
3F:推 dunkjames:还有天仁茗茶"沉稳内敛的铁观音"也是恶梦一场 10/06 16:10
4F:推 dunkjames:千万不要尝试去翻译它.... 10/06 16:12