作者timwu (Tim Wu)
看板Eng-Class
标题[请益] 这样类比改写对不对?
时间Sat Oct 1 14:50:46 2011
我想要拿Amazon 这两天的新闻稿来消遣一下台湾代工厂. 最後一句不知道怎麽写比较
幽默.
原文:
Dear Customer,
There are two types of companies: those that work hard to charge customers
more, and those that work hard to charge customers less. Both approaches can
work. We are firmly in the second camp.
想改成
Dear employees:
There are two types of companys. Those that work hard to charge customers
little, and those that work smart to benefit customers much. Both approaches
can work. We are firmly in the second camp. What? who is in the first camp?
No, I didn't mention Q.
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