※ 引述《m13m13m (奇怪 还没收到??)》之铭言： : 因为我觉得我的English Writing 还停留在 Junior high school... : 但这封信很重要 T - T. 书到用时方恨少、是非经过不知难... : 这是一封想要采访Microsoft(用中文xd...)的invitation. : P1: : He wants us to know how important software engineering is within a : company so that we need to investigate some famous and great company like : you, hoping you can give us an opportunity to let us know more about : Microsoft. : 几个点: : 1. how important.....is 那句好像怪怪的 文法我不知道有没有错 文法没错, 但可改得好一点 How does software engineering dominate in a company 这样会好点 : 2. like you. 还是like yours? like yours, 但那样写的tone 也不太好 so that we need to investigate some famous and great company like you 这样语调不太好, 这里意思是 我们ooxx, 所以我们要去你公司调查 感觉去搜查人们一定要给你去 We would like to have a visit to your company <<<< 之类的语调会好一点 : 3. 用hoping giving 会不会比hoping you can give来的好 文法错了 不应那样改 两个也错 括号是一般可省略, 假如硬要修那句文法, We hope (that) you can give us an opportunity to know more about Microsoft 这意思是 希望你可以给我一次机会知道微软更多 We would be grateful if OOXX 另外, can 後面一定要跟 bare infinitive, 用giving 是错文法 用give 才对 : P2: : 我要说他们公司已经在过去10年(不是微软)已经在激烈的竞争中生存下来了 : ... which has survived in the keen comeptition for 10 years. : survive 会不会不太polite,如果要更respective 一点该怎麽说好呢? Your company has fought very hard against competitors in the past decade. Finally, it has become a prestigious company in recent years. 这里不太确定，还有请其他高手解答。 : Finally: : 最後我写 : Sincere Thanks. : Spiderman. : //spiderman是假设xd... : 顺序有错吗?....是要先签名还是用敬用语? : 谢谢大家 <(_ _)> 顺序没错，但Sincere Thanks有点怪， 这边要看上款 1. 上款没明确名称 下款用Yours faithfully 2. 上款有明确名称 下款用Yours sincerely (有口诀的 非亲非故faithfully) 格式要是 Yours sincerely, Spiderman 不过因为考试, 才有那条规则, 其实现实用Yours truly 那就百搭了。 --

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