作者nov123 (nov123)
看板Eng-Class
标题[请益] 儿童英文作文请帮忙修改!!
时间Mon Aug 8 22:35:43 2011
以下是我家小妹妹(小学五年级)写的英文作文
内容是用她会的单字写出来的
我有先看过一次,但是应该是有很多文法上的错误(我...英文太烂了><)
麻烦各位，可以帮我看一下吗，感谢大家
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One day, the backpack bear joined the bouncing-ball camp.
The teacher of camp took all children to the zoo.
Backpack bear saw a lot of animals,alligators,elephants,dinosaurs,
gorilla and hummingbird.
Then backpack bear took a helicopter.
On the helicopter, he saw some happy hippo singing in the lake.
When backpack bear went to the zoo exit, he saw an astronaut buy a gumball
for a girl with beautiful fingers.
How is a fantastic day!
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1F：推 ventress:How a fantastic day! 08/08 23:18
2F：→ ventress:backpack bear 是指"背包熊"吗? 08/08 23:19
3F：→ nov123:是的唷!是她喜欢的一个玩偶^^ 08/08 23:47
4F：推 ventress:妹妹有在哪里学英文吗? 感觉句子很像英文童书 08/09 00:04
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