对於翻好的句子内容排列组合越看越怪
想请教大家, 我的中译可有更顺的排列法?
先谢谢了:)
1. (英翻中/原句): "IPA is a int'l NGO......(以下翻译)
It is interdisciplinary and embraces in membership persons of all professions
working for or with children."
我的中译: 作为一个跨领域的组织,IPA拥有与儿童共事或为儿童发声的所有专业领域会员.
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2. (英翻中/原句): IPA is governed by a Board of Directors and a Council of
National Representatives together with five members-at-large elected for
three years.
我的中译: IPA是由董事会、国家代表会，以及每三年一选的五名大国成员所主导。
(注: together with 之後不太懂..这里是指Board of Directors(A), Council of
National Representatives(B), 以及"together with..."(C)共同主导,还是只有A+B主导,
然後C是来形容B的?? //另外five members-at-large怎翻? 我是凭常识(?),感觉翻的)
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3.This document amplifies Article 31 by proposing policy actions within
"the normal sectors of government".
问题: 这个 the normal sectors 可有特殊名称? 我直翻"正常部门"看的有点怪
(google只发现这叫做" 正?扇形域(正规扇形域)", 显然不合这里翻译)
Thanks!!!
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