作者jaaaab22 (Dabby)
看板Eng-Class
标题[请益] 可以帮我订正一下自我介绍吗
时间Fri Jul 8 02:01:43 2011
可以帮我纠正文法或不自然的用法吗
谢谢
I was born in Kaohsiung. Father works in Taiwan Power Company, and Mother
is a beautiful housewife. I have two brothers and a sister, all of us grown
up in a lovely house. Four years ago, I came to Taipei for learning by
myself. It pushed me to be a independent person.
In my four years of college, I joined to the volleyball club and badminton
club. In sports club, spirit of teamwork is necessary. Thanks to that, I
could learned how to get along well with my friends. And, I did a lot of
part-time job in my college life. It could not only extend my social life,
but also learn the skill how to deal with the problem.
In my spare time, I like singing and watching foreign TV show.Singing
could release my pressure and watching TV show or program could enrich my
knowledge. I always try to learn the thing that I never know.
Thank you for listen to my introduction.
还满短的其实
谢谢
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