作者kerorolover (越来越像五楼了)
看板Eng-Class
标题[请益] 帮我英文健检一下 拜托
时间Sun Apr 17 22:30:18 2011
这是我刚写的作文
我想应该看得出我的程度
I would talk about two things about my recently reading.
One is a news digested from Taipei Times concerning the USA's aims sales to
Taiwan, which involves the changes of relationship between the USA and China.
A report issued by the scholars and masters in the field of international
relations of Far East Asia said that it comes with the increasing contact
between the cross-strait, the bilateral relation of USA and China will face
the new rethinkings.Should the USA, out of the domestic need, continue to
sale the aims sales to Taiwan??
The think tank think that the answer maybe is not.
The aims sales may create a "vicious circle".
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我觉得我遇到瓶颈了
因为没有受过外文系程度的作文训练
我觉得 我在遣词用字上 常常随心所至 写出一堆连自己也不知道好不好的文章来
我看我自己的问题是 1.字汇量不足 没法明确表达自己的意思
2.对单字的使用,了解不够,影响写作
3.常常有文法的小错误 像是单数动词少加s 冠词用错an a
需要常常注意一下小地方。
但我自己常可以感觉到,随着阅读量增广,我常常可以回过头来修改自己的作文。
只是,在下笔的当下,我常常没有什麽谱,会写出什麽东西,自己也不知道。
问一下高手版友,你觉得我有必要请个经过外文系训练的英文写作家教吗
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1F:→ dunchee:(未必有实质帮助,所以参考看看就好: 04/18 01:08
3F:→ hoch:是 arm sales to taiwan 还是 aim sale? 04/18 08:54
4F:→ tengharold:老话:先把短句写好,写的有条理,再来写长句 04/19 14:47