作者Vic128715 (Vic huang)
看板Eng-Class
标题[文法] 前面这样子会很怪吗???
时间Sun Mar 20 20:40:43 2011
It's an extremely beautiful day.
The bird was singing, the wind was dancing, and the sun was smiling
when everyone woke up. We went to Danshui with our professor to know
more about Dr. Mackay's story in Formosa. Dr. Mackay arrived at Danshui
in 1872. He said "that there seemed to be an invisible line that led him
to this spectacular island. So today our priority target is to know more
about Dr. Mackay's story and to see the beautiful island in Danshui.
这只是第一段，
请问前面那样子好像怪怪的 ==，该怎麽修改好><"
第一次写作文....Orz...
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1F：→ johnhmj:作文作业？只要用简单且正确的文法，应该不会被扣分吧？！ 03/20 23:47
2F：→ Vic128715:请问前面的文法需要更正哪里吗??? 总觉得怪怪的... 03/21 12:39
3F：推 heziying:It *was* an extremely beautiful day 03/21 14:49
4F：→ heziying:The *birds were* singing 这样好了 ^^ 03/21 14:50
5F：→ Vic128715:感激~~~ THXS 03/23 01:00