作者kenotic (弱智)
看板Eng-Class
标题Re: [求译] 一段故事
时间Wed Mar 9 00:33:34 2011
※ 引述《G8 (鸡拜狼)》之铭言:
: 求中译/英译:
: 有一对情侣和他们的朋友去登山,当他们到山下准备攻顶时,天气突然转坏了,但是他们还
: 是要执意的上山去. 於是就留下那个女的在营地,可是过了三天都没有看见他们回来,那个
: 女的非常担心,心想可能是因为天气的原因吧, 等呀等的,,终於大家回来了,可是唯独她男
: 朋友没有回来.大家告诉她,第一天她的男友就不幸死了! 他们赶在头七回来,心想他可能
: 会回来找她,於是大家围成一圈,让她坐在中间,到了快12点时,突然他的男友出现了还浑身
: 是血,他一把抓住她就往外跑,她吓的哇哇大叫,极力挣扎,这时她男友说... 在攻顶的第一
: 天就发生了山难!全部人都死了只有他活着...
: 属句子/段落:(三行以上皆属段落)
: 段落
: 我的试译:(求译「段落」者,本栏请勿留白)
: A pair of couples with their friends went to mountain climbing.
went mountain climbing
: When they
: prepared to attack the peak of the mountain, the weather suddenly
: deteriorated, but they still insist on climbing the mountain. So he left his
: girlfriend to stay at the camp. After three days, they did not come back. She
left his girlfriend at the camp
: was very worried, and she thought the reason was the weather.
: Finally everybody came back, except her boyfriend. They told her at the
: first day when they tried very hard to get to the top his boyfriend was
: unfortunate dead! They thought his soul might come back to look for her. Her
unfortunately dead come back to visit her
: friends want to protect her, so they make a circle and she seat in the middle.
seat her
: At midnight, suddenly her boyfriend appeared who coated with blood.
appeared coated with blood
: He holds herand ran outside. She was yelled and struggled with him.
her hand and ran outside She yelled
: At the moment, he said that: “Everyone was died in the first day when the
dead on
: avalanche happened and I was the only survival.”
(survivor)
: 提问:
: 这是我自己试翻的,想麻烦各位大大帮我改正一下,错误可能会有点多,请见谅
: 谢谢罗^^
有括号是建议 (代表你原先的也OK)
其他修改的地方就供参考罗
请多指教
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1F:推 G8:多谢K大^^ 03/09 09:15