作者G8 (鸡拜狼)
看板Eng-Class
标题[求译] 一段故事
时间Tue Mar 8 14:42:21 2011
求中译/英译:
有一对情侣和他们的朋友去登山,当他们到山下准备攻顶时,天气突然转坏了,但是他们还
是要执意的上山去. 於是就留下那个女的在营地,可是过了三天都没有看见他们回来,那个
女的非常担心,心想可能是因为天气的原因吧, 等呀等的,,终於大家回来了,可是唯独她男
朋友没有回来.大家告诉她,第一天她的男友就不幸死了! 他们赶在头七回来,心想他可能
会回来找她,於是大家围成一圈,让她坐在中间,到了快12点时,突然他的男友出现了还浑身
是血,他一把抓住她就往外跑,她吓的哇哇大叫,极力挣扎,这时她男友说... 在攻顶的第一
天就发生了山难!全部人都死了只有他活着...
属句子/段落:(三行以上皆属段落)
段落
我的试译:(求译「段落」者,本栏请勿留白)
A pair of couples with their friends went to mountain climbing. When they
prepared to attack the peak of the mountain, the weather suddenly
deteriorated, but they still insist on climbing the mountain. So he left his
girlfriend to stay at the camp. After three days, they did not come back. She
was very worried, and she thought the reason was the weather.
Finally everybody came back, except her boyfriend. They told her at the
first day when they tried very hard to get to the top his boyfriend was
unfortunate dead! They thought his soul might come back to look for her. Her
friends want to protect her, so they make a circle and she seat in the middle.
At midnight, suddenly her boyfriend appeared who coated with blood.
He holds herand ran outside. She was yelled and struggled with him.
At the moment, he said that: “Everyone was died in the first day when the
avalanche happened and I was the only survival.”
提问:
这是我自己试翻的,想麻烦各位大大帮我改正一下,错误可能会有点多,请见谅
谢谢罗^^
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※ 编辑: G8 来自: 173.76.225.78 (03/08 14:47)
1F:推 kenotic:被吓到了QQ 03/08 18:35
2F:→ kenotic:翻的不错,was died可能要改一下 03/08 18:37
3F:→ pptuser:只看了最後一句,Everyone was dead (on) the first day 03/08 23:15
4F:→ pptuser:(when) the avalanche happned and i ~ "survivor". 错多 03/08 23:16
5F:→ pptuser:改成was dead the day the avalanche happened ... 03/08 23:17
6F:→ G8:恩恩 多谢!!! 03/09 09:15