作者bunnies (bunnies)
看板Eng-Class
标题Re: [求译] 请大家帮我看一下讲稿是否通顺正确
时间Sun Mar 6 10:33:39 2011
※ 引述《arthush0905 (冰焰)》之铭言:
: 求英译:
: 属段落:
: 我的试译:
: 新年新希望
: New Year's Resolutions
my new year's resolutions
: 亲爱的老师及同学们大家好
: Dear Teacher and classmates
Hi everyone
: 非常谢谢这学期能有这个机会参加这个课程
: I really appreciate the opportunity to join the course this semester.
I'm really happy to be here to attend this course
: 因为自觉我在英文会话与听力方面的能力很差,所以一直很害怕接触这个领域
: Because I aware my English conversation and listening very poor,
: so I am scared of access the domain.
I've always scared of this subject cause I don't think I'm that great
in english speaking and listening.
: 所以我的指导教授建议我可以参加这门课来增加我的能力
: But my advisor suggests I can join the class to improve my capability.
therefore my advisor suggested me to take this class to improve my english
conversation skills.
: 但是因为我不是本科的学生,所以之前一直很焦虑
: Because I am not the undergraduate students, I am very anxiety prior to this.
But since I was not an english major, I was really nervous before I came here.
: 所以我在这学期有两个目标
: So I have two goals in this semester.
So I have two goals for this semester
: 第一,我希望我能在这堂课中尽力做好,也能增加我的英文沟通能力
: Fist, I whish I can do my best in this class
: and enhance my capability about English communication.
first, I hope I can do my best in this class, and improve my english
communication skills.
: 第二,我之前有过大约一年的工作经验
: Secondly, I've been working in the psychiatric unit for about one years.
second, I worked in the psychiatric unit (这是什麽呢?) for about a year before
: 而现在是个全职的硕二学生
: Now I am a full-time student in my second-year master's program.
and now I'm a full time, second year student in my master's program
: 所以这学期,我希望我可以在七月毕业
: So in this semester, I wish I can expect to graduate in July.
so I'm expected to graduate this July
: 而这也是我最大的愿望
: And it is my largest expected.
and this is my biggest wish right now
: 非常谢谢大家
: Thank you very much.
: 如果有什麽需要改进的地方,也请大家多多指正
: If there is any need for improvement, please tell me.
and please tell me if there's anything I could do better
: Please do not hesitate to give me some advice.
Thank you very much.
: 提问:
: 因预计要进行三分钟之讲稿
: 不知这样是否通顺或文法上是否正确
: 恳请大家给我一些建议与修正
: 谢谢大家
猜想原po是在留学的硕二学生?
希望你顺利准时毕业啦!! :)
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