作者kenotic (弱智)
看板Eng-Class
标题[资讯] 花博brochure
时间Mon Feb 28 23:00:34 2011
以下是捷运站里拿到的花博手册上的英文
个人觉得写得很不错
因此在此就几个字，以及节录几句话来分享一下
(有几句只节录重点，因此不是很完整，请见谅)
set many firsts
Onward Formosa
philatelic products
star-studded cast
never-been-seen art
march in a parade with friends young and old
geomancy
puppetry animation
to experience firsthand what the disaster was like
fish dart from beneath your feet
evokes images of gorgeous brocade
You can also see the lights of airplanes as taking off and landing
(上面这句不晓得是否合文法?)
start at set time
semi-circular gable wall
a walled city
the seat of government power
classy hot-spring hotels
the cutaway of the rock
is like taking a trip back in time
pump room
...mountain, from where it would flow down pipes to people's houses.
(...为个文法完整的句子，句中where是否改成which会较文法正确，亦或皆可?)
verdant woods
a romantic ambience
flush the toilet with reclaim-water
a butterfly preserve
The Minsheng Community was patterned after American residential communities
greenify the back lanes
(greenify不是每本字典都查的到)
tree-shrouded street
Part of the set of the film "Taipei Exchanges" was the "Daughter's Cafe,"
located on the well-known tree-lined Fujiin Street.
(上面这句话句法不错，有点像是某本参考书里面"完全倒装"的概念)
with its simple design and commitment to green living
a low-key, green space
Hidden among the densely wooded lanes and alleys of the Minsheng community
are a number of eateries purveying delicious treats to satisfy all palettes.
(上面这句的句型，似乎是少数文法书里面才会提到的"被动语态倒装"的概念)
in seventh heaven
Don't miss out on your chance
用字和句型上给人感觉很有外国人的感觉
(若是没在国外住过的人那真的很强) 不晓得大家感觉如何
有些字也许不难，仅就我觉得不错学习的字来分享
(btw我不太care里面的文法，反正写得很漂亮且读者看得懂)
欢迎不吝指教
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1F：→ noruas:推!!真的很厉害 02/28 23:02
2F：→ noruas:写这种文宣的职业叫copywriter 02/28 23:03
3F：→ noruas:台湾很多外销的产品都是请国外的高手来写的,我想这篇也是 02/28 23:03
4F：→ mater2004:请问上下两行都有关系吗? 有些是独立的名词? 02/28 23:20
5F：→ pptuser:as taking off，我直觉不会加as 02/28 23:32
6F：→ pptuser:from where 正确，where前面是介系词的话，常有名词用法 02/28 23:34
7F：→ pptuser:people's houses 有点中式英文 02/28 23:35
8F：→ kenotic:不好意思，有些是独立的名词，有些是句子 02/28 23:39
9F：→ kenotic:感谢1F的资讯^^ 02/28 23:40
10F：→ heziying:people's houses可以,我觉得不像中式英文~ 03/01 07:52
11F：→ heziying:airplanes as taking off and landing -> airplanes at 03/01 07:53
12F：→ heziying:take off and landing? *shrug* 03/01 07:53
13F：→ heziying:satisfy all palettes.<-哈哈哈有点矫情的感觉~^^ 该用 03/01 07:56
14F：→ heziying:palates才对 palette是画家的调色板 03/01 07:56
15F：→ kenotic:谢谢，原来是palates^^ 03/01 09:25