是这样的，朋友妹妹的班上有个挺有趣的活动， 要交换同学所写的一篇中文作文并试着把他翻译成英文。 由於我朋友找不到懂英文的人帮忙因此拜托我， 问题是我的英文能力实在只能读不能写～ 而且朋友妹妹交换到的这篇国文作文能力也实在不甚好， 所以我译出来实在不是很有信心 >"< 想请版上的朋友帮我润饰或检查一下这篇试译文罗！ 感谢！ 求中译／英译： 记得小时候的某年暑假，亲戚们不约而同一起回到乡下的外婆家。有别於都市缤纷 的休闲活动，乡下的规律生活显得相当乏味……我和表兄弟们一起到外婆家的西瓜 田去玩，偶然发现了一颗很大的西瓜，我和表兄弟们一起合力把大西瓜搬回外婆家 。搬回家後，我们开始滚着西瓜玩，玩着玩着，不小心撞翻了门口的鱼缸，鱼缸破 了，鱼拍动着身体，最後就死了……门外的猫和院子内池塘的鸭子，进来开始一番 「抢鱼大作战」。在牠们抢鱼的同时，我们也玩疯了，一旁的大西瓜也破了，散了 一地…… 到田里工作的大人们回来见到这样的状况後，不但没有骂我们，反倒和我们一同瞎 闹，到最後变成了一地的死鱼、死鸭和西瓜汁……我们的晚餐多了香喷喷的鱼和鸭 子给我们配菜。这样一个有趣的童年，不论经过多少年，也都依然深深地烙印在每 一个人的心中。 我的试译：（求译「段落」者，本栏请勿留白） One summer vacation I remember in my childhood, many of my relatives came coincidentally back to my grandmother’s home. Unlike the variety of recreation people could have in city, the ordinary lifestyle I had there in the countryside is pretty boring…… One day, My cousins and I went into my grandmother’s watermelon field to make some fun. We found a quite big melon, and carried it back in concert to my grandmother’s home. After that, we started to roll the melon on the ground for fun, and imprudently ran the fish jar down, so the jar was broken. The fishes fall on the ground and flopped, and all dead eventually…… Then the cats and gooses in the pond of the yard all came in, started a “fish-robbing war.” When they were scrambling for the fishes, we’re also going crazy, and the melon was broken to pieces on the ground. When the elders who had worked in field came in and saw what was just happened, they didn’t blame us, but went into mischief with us instead. Eventually, the circumstance was just a chaos, the dead fishes and dead gooses lay down on the ground, here and there, and the melon juice flowed…… So, there were savory fishes and gooses which was added to our dinner. It was such a amusing childhood memory. No matter what years passed, the memory is still deeply impressive in everyone’s mind. --

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