作者memorabilia (みなみ)
看板Eng-Class
标题Re: [请益] 请问文法是否有错误!?
时间Fri Nov 26 18:35:41 2010
※ 引述《memorabilia (みなみ)》之铭言:
: 就在下个人浅见做些微建议
: ※ 引述《qo4jo (说好不是这样的)》之铭言:
: : 以下是原PO的英文自介
: : 请众高手们检视原PO文法是否有错误
: : 以及有任何错误之处请众高手们不吝啬指教
: : 感恩
: : Good morning professors,
: : I'm xxx, studying in xxx of xxx at xxx.
: : Thanks for granted me the opportunity to introduce myself.
: : I've left xxx and studying in xxx alone for several years.
: : This has developed my independence character to adapt to different kind of
my independent personality / characteristic kinds
: : environment in the university life.
: : Among all the subjects I have studied, Marketing Management is my favorite,
: : and also as the direction for further research.
it has been leading me towards further research.
: : As to my personality, I’m helpfulness, acted with prudence, and brave enough
for helpful (?), prudent, and brave (都用adj)
: : to face all kinds of challenges. One of my weaknesses is that sometimes
: I’m too sensitive and can’t stay
: However, sometimes I may somewhat be
sensitive and fail to stay calm to deal with things.
: : calm to do things. I need to work on that.
: : Finally, I hope there is a chance for me to enter the xxx of xxx as a
I would have the chance to contribute to the study in
: : graduate student.
this school as a graduate student.
: : Above is my self-introduction, and thanks for your listening.
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