作者hoch (Sanctuary)
看板Eng-Class
标题Re: [请益] 简单的自我介绍有无问题
时间Thu Nov 18 18:48:18 2010
: 明天应徵工作准备的一段简单英文自我介绍
: 因为很久没用英文了,程度实在很低落,奋战几小时後挤出一点东西
: Hi, I am 王小明, twenty-five years old.
Good morning everyone. My name is Wang ...
: There are four people in my family, including my parents, young brother, and
: me.
: My father is a serious worker, he very care about our family.
: 我父亲是一位认真的上班族,他很照顾家庭
: My mother is both a housewife and a hairdresser.
: 母亲是一位家庭主妇,也是一个美容师
: And my brother, he is looking for a job like me.
: 我弟弟跟我一样在找工作
建议以上户口调查全部删掉。
: I graduated from college last year.
: 去年毕业
I graduated from Harvard University last year.
大学名字不讲出来等於白说。
: When I in college , I have two years of work experience.
: 大学时有两年的打工经验
I had two years of part-time work experiences while in college.
: I was a waiter in a restaurant.
: 在餐厅当过服务生
I used to work in a restaurant as a waiting staff.
: The other work was a salesman to sold computer, and I can repair item.
: 另一个是在电脑公司卖电脑,也会帮忙修理
Because I am a qualified technician of computer hardwares, I also
worked in a local computer shop at one point.
: My great interest are surfing the internet and playing video games.
: 我的兴趣是上网跟打电动
My favorite activities in leisure time are surfing the Internet
and playing video games.
(你确定要说你的兴趣是打电动?)
: I lean tings quickly and I am earnest in my work, which are both my advantage.
: 我的优点是学习力强跟工作认真
I take all my assignments seriously and am able to pick up new
skills in a short time.
: I will continue to study and increase my professional skills.
: 我会持续的进修并加强我的专业技能
这句其实没啥实际意义。
: If I have a chance to earn this position, I will do my best in the future.
: 如果有机会我能撑取到这职务,我会尽我全力
其实这句也....
就跟大部分台湾年轻人的自传一样,这一篇没有提到你过去曾有的辉煌经历。也
看不出来你会什麽东西。
※ 编辑: hoch 来自: 111.248.4.95 (11/18 21:25)
1F:推 jamche:谢谢大大的鞭策 11/18 22:21
2F:→ tengharold:其实h大英文应该写简单一点,原po英语程度不佳,应该 11/19 01:15
3F:→ tengharold:也不会用到waitstaff这种字 :) 11/19 01:16