作者tengharold (RoadMan_A)
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标题Re: [求译] 拜托大家帮我看看翻译与文法有没有错?
时间Thu Nov 18 04:50:59 2010
※ 引述《kenkoso (ken)》之铭言:
: 求英译:中译英
: 属段落:
: 神经肌肉电刺激在临床上被许多物理治疗师所使用在治疗水肿的改善、促进血液循环、新
: 陈代谢、疼痛减轻和伤口的修复等等。市面上许多电刺激器产品都是说明有所功效的,却
: 没有给使用者在刺激时一个客观疗效的指标。本研究主要是建构一个可携式可程式化低频
: 电刺激与阻抗量测装置,在电刺激前後分别做0.1~500Hz多频率阻抗量测,取得刺激前後
: 阻抗与相位的资讯,了解电刺激对皮肤肌肉组织的变化,是否在刺激後皮肤阻抗有较大的
: 差异。
: Neuromuscular electrical stimulation on clinical has been used by many
^^^^^^^^形容词没名词
: physical therapists to treat dropsy's improvement, promote blood circulation
^^^^^----------^^^^^^^^^^^ 改善的东西不必治疗
: and metabolism, alleviate pain, repair wound…etc. In the market, many
woundS
: electrical stimulators has been claimed their effect, but has not given an
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ 被动语态不对 ^^^ 主词为复数
: objective explanation of electricity stimulation curative effect to users.
: This objective is to develop a portable , programmable, low frequency
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^这个目标?
: electrical stimulators and the impedance measuring device, measure the
a portable...stimulatorS and THE 都是问题
: impedance in the frequency of 0.1~500Hz during electrical stimulation,
: according to the magnitude and the phase of the impedance to analysis the
^^^^^^^^^^^也不对
: change of tissue impedance after electrical stimulation.
以上完全仅看英文,我没对照中文校稿
: 本系统使用MSP430f149单晶片为核心,控制周边电刺激电路与撷取、记录阻抗变化资料,
: 其内部AD模组将阻抗资料数位化,储存至FLASH记忆体,并藉由USB通讯传输介面将资料传
: 至电脑端并於电脑端作进一步处理、分析(如阻抗杂讯滤除及计算出阻抗值与相位值)。电
: 刺激电流范围0.3~3mA,刺激频率0.1Hz~10Khz。系统平台可直接由电脑端USB供电或锂电
: 池(3V~5V)供电,平均消耗电流约145mA,平均消耗功率为约0.5W。
: 此外本装置在十位受测者中在刺激时量测即时阻抗的变化,在刺激前後量测0.1Hz~500Hz
: 阻抗的变化,十位受测者在各频率阻抗都呈现降低的现象,代表电刺激对於皮肤肌肉组织
: 是有作用。这项阻抗变化的指标对於电刺激会增加血液循环或者新陈代谢可望提供了客观
: 电刺激疗效的解释。
: 我的试译:
: This system was using a microprocessor ( MSP430f149 ) to realize prototyping.
^^^^^^^^^时态有误 ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
用字不搭配
: The device were including (1) controls peripheral electric circuit of
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^
单复数、时态都有误 又一个动词? 赘字
: electrical stimulation (2) internal A/D module translates the data to digital
: (3) a flash memory system to record a change of impedance during electrical
: stimulation (4) after all processes had been done on platform, the data could
^^^^这里要另起新句
: be conveyed to computer by USB for further analyses ( such as the noise
: filter of impedance and calculate the magnitude and the phase of the
: impedance ) .The current range of electrical stimulation is 0.3~3mA and the
: frequency range is 0.1Hz~10kHz. The system platform can be supply power by
^^^^^^^^^
被动语态用错
: USB or lithium battery (3V~5V) and the average current consumption is
: approximately 145mA, the average power consumption is approximately 0.5W.
: In this system, experiment ten subjects by measuring the change of impedance
^^^^^^^^^^位置错误
: during electrical stimulation, the impedance in the 0.1Hz~500Hz frequency
: range of ten subjects is decrease after electrical stimulation. Thus, it
^^^^^^^^^^^这是什麽时态
the impedance...of ten subjects也要改
: shows that the electrical stimulation is useful to the skin tissue. This
: change of impedance could indicate that electrical stimulation can increase
: the blood circulation or metabolism and provide the objective explanation of
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^两词位置要互换
: electrical stimulation curative effect.
: 提问:不知道有没有文法的错误、辞汇的错误或是大意上有错 ? 谢谢大家..拜托了
还有许多我懒得注的小错...
我还没对照中文呢
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1F:推 kenkoso:感谢!! 11/18 18:35