作者azalea751129 (小米姐)
看板Eng-Class
标题[请益] 可以帮我看看一篇短文的文法吗?
时间Sat Oct 30 11:39:57 2010
这是自己写的演讲稿，可是感觉好像有一些问题>"<，想请大家帮我看看
中文：
流浪动物(Stray Animals)
今天我要讲的内容是有关於流浪动物。
我想在座的各位或多或少，应该都有过养宠物的经验。
我是很喜欢动物的人，每次看见路边脏兮兮、瘦巴巴的流浪猫、狗时，心里都很难过。
每次都会想那些饲主到底是抱着怎麽样的心态去抛弃那些可怜的动物。
猫咪、狗狗，在他们还小的时候都非常的可爱，都会得到主人的宠爱；
但等他们渐渐长大，不再可爱了，有些可恶的人就会因为种种乱七八糟的原因，
而把他们丢弃，完全没有考虑到宠物们在外面的世界要如何生存下去。
我的家里因为没有足够的空间可以好好的让宠物生活，也没有多余的时间可以陪伴他，
所以尽管我真的很喜欢动物，却并没有饲养宠物，因为不想让他受苦。
我觉得如果真的要养动物，就要下定决心好好的照顾他，不要因为私人的种种理由，
而让宠物们过着痛苦的生活。
自译：
Today my topic is 〝Stray Animals〞.
I think all of you must have seen the stray animals on the street.
I’m the kind of person who loves animals very much.
Every time when I saw the dirty、thin stray cats or stray dogs on the street,
I was sad and angry. Icouldn’t imagine what kind of people would abandon
these poor and innocent creatures.
Everyone might probably have pet once. We all know that kitties and poppies
are very cute and sweet when they are still babies. But when they grow up,
and not that cute anymore, some people would throw them away, just because of
some selfish and ridiculous reasons. They don't even think about how their
pets could survive in the outside world.
I don’t have enough time and space for the animals, even though I do love
animals very much, I still don’t have one because I don’t want them always
being lonely.
I think if you decide to have pets, then you must make up your mind to take
care of them. Do not abandon them just for some small reasons.
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