求中译／英译：中译 属句子／段落：（三行以上皆属段落） “Private Moon” is a visual poem, telling a story about a man who found the Moon and stayed with her for the rest of his life. In the upper world, in the attic of his house, he saw the Moon which had fallen from the sky. At first she was hiding from the sun in a dark, damp tunnel and was constantly frightened by the passing trains. Then she came to the house of the man. Wrapping the moon in a thick blanket, he gives her autumn apples and drinks tea with her. When she finally recovers he puts her on a boat and carries her across a dark river to a high bank, where moon pine-trees grow. He descends to the lower world wearing the clothes of his deceased father and then returns, illuminating the way with his private moon. Transcending the borders between worlds via narrow bridges, sinking into sleep, taking care of the heavenly body, man turns into a mythological being living in the real world like in a fantastic fairy-tale. 我的试译：（求译「段落」者，本栏请勿留白） 「Private Moon」是首述说着一位男士发现一轮月亮， 并陪伴在月亮身边，直到月亮生命尽了的视觉诗。 在世界上，在他家阁楼，他看见一轮月亮从天坠落。 起初她在黑暗潮湿的隧道里躲避太阳，而被来来往往的车辆所惊吓。 後来她来到了他的家。 那男士帮她盖上毯子，并给她秋天的苹果和她一起喝茶。 当她终於恢复体力，他将她安置在船上，带她渡黑河来到 moon pine-trees所生长的河岸。 他穿着他已故父亲之衣物来到那的世界，然後折返，一路 上都有他专属的月为他带来光亮。 透过那狭窄的桥梁连接着不同世界，沉眠，照顾着天体，男士成 了神话，在现实世界上，如同在梦幻里。 提问： 虽然英文字看得懂,但是文法不太熟,不知道有没有错误, 尤其最後那两段英文实在太抽象了><"" 如有翻译错误等等请指教谢谢!! Q1.moon pine-trees怎麽翻译比较好? Q2.Transcending the borders between worlds via narrow bridges, sinking into sleep, taking care of the heavenly body第一句和第二句看得懂,第三句不知道有什 麽特殊涵义然後三句加在一起就不知道在说什麽了... 然後整个第四段也觉得自己翻得很差Q^Q,请大家多多指教 PS目前只想到这些问题,如还有其他错误等等,也请大家指教一下 谢谢m(_ _)m ※ 编辑: lunai 来自: 140.127.65.135 (10/21 18:13) ※ 编辑: lunai 来自: 140.127.65.135 (10/21 19:07)