最近在作托福整合写作的模板，有些用字不太能确定这样用合不合宜 ----- From the materials presented, the author and lecturer are both discussing TOPIC. However, they have little in common regarding the issue. The lecturer considers this thesis in the passage allows of major disputes about all of the three points. In the first place, the point that the professor disagrees with is that __O__ . He holds the opinion that __X__ . Thus, from his angle, the professor rejects the composer. In addition, this man makes another point to argue that __OO__ is not exact at all. He offers the explanation that __XX__. Hence, in light of this man, he refutes the writer again. Finally, the speaker underscores __xxx__ to deny the standpoint in the passage. Although the article alleges __OOO__, yet the lecture indicates that __XXX__. Therefore, according to the speaker, he rebuts the author over and over. To conclude, the lecturer strikes the passage by contending that THESIS with compact and concrete elaboration. The implausible points from the piece are disproved by the convincing points from the discourse. ----- allows of major disputes about 我有查到allow of no dispute，所以我原句可以表示有很大讨论空间吧? 介系词用about还是over比较对? 紫色三段这三句结束段落会不会怪怪的? strikes the passage strike可以接passage这种受词吗? compact and concrete elaboration 这两个形容词一起会redundant吗? piece , discourse 这两个词拿来代换passage和lecture适合吗? article alleges , lecture indicates allege跟indicate可以这样用非人名词当主词吗? 我知道有些词要不时的代换，可是金底部分这种频率会不会太刻意反而不好? --- 以上，恳请版友能帮忙解答，感谢! 总是想弄得漂亮但又怕弄巧成拙~"~ --

※ 发信站: 批踢踢实业坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 218.168.227.213