作者mmindy (mindy)
看板Eng-Class
标题Re: [文法] 想请板友帮我看看有没有文法的错误 或갠…
时间Tue Aug 31 00:23:29 2010
※ 引述《willie0812 (willie)》之铭言:
: (代PO)
: 朋友写了下面几句英文 是公司要放在网站上的
: 想请人帮忙检查看看有没有文法错误 或是语意不顺(台式英文)
: 无奈小弟我英文实在不佳 看不出个什麽东东
: 麻烦板友可以帮忙检查看看吗?!
: As Eurobike show is on the corner, Birzman staffs were like cats on a hot
: tin roof.
: In order to catch everyone’s eyes, Birzman prepared everything diligently!
: These are only a part of the luggage to Eurobike show!
: Besides, everyone has to share about 50 to 60 DMs! It’s really heavy…..
: This is our handsome boss~~~He looks good in that fitting suit.
: Birzman designers! They are really shy to let me take pictures.
: But I still took some furtively! Ha~~~
: What fantastic products of Birzman will be shown at Eurobike show for 2011?
: Will I tell you what they are? Ha~~~ not really! Keep you in suspense.
: Do not be open-mouthed as you see the incredible products by Birzman team!
: (应该算是照片的注解吧)
: 谢谢
我只是试试看罗!!因为不是很确定你到底意思是什麽
所以我自行改编了一些 不然就会很chinglish.....
As Eurobike show is around the corner, Birzman staffs are like cats on hot bricks.
In order to catch everyone's attention, Birzman have done their best!
第三句真的看不懂了= =什麽luggage?
Besides,each staff has to give out 50 to 60 flyers which is a really heavy stack.
This is our handsome boss, he looks really nice in that gorgeous suit!
These are Birzman designers! They are so shy that we can only take few photos of them.
Wanna take a look at the most amazing product in Birzman Eurobike 2011 show?
I would like to keep all of you hanging on until you come to our show and amazed by our incredible designs!
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